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for Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

by TCardan

person HealerAriel
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squee* With the funniness! The boys are such..... boys.
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, please do continue. I\'ve gotten quite addicted to yout stories, and this one is just hilarious. ahh, I\'d love to see Mary Sue fall for Harry. =D
person Dreamweaver
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I\'ve said it before but I love your sense of humour and the way you think, Petal. I can just imagine that things have decidely turned SLytherin versus Gryffindor as far as winning Mary Sue\'s affections is concerned. Ca\'t wait to see how she thanks Harry and Ron. Although, if it were me, I think I\'d still be outside with those delicious Slytherins. *evil grin*
person wookieejedi
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um well one you need alot more sex, two you hould have malfoy and zabini dule harry and ron over her at one point, three there should be like one huge gang bang at one point,( poisibly a return of fred and gorge)
person Cyn
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story even though it\'s a mary sue.........it\'s smut filled just the way I like it ........i like almost as much as your other story.....good luck with both...-Cyn
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'d like to see a threesome between Mary Sue, Blaise, and Draco. Then maybe she could meet Oliver Wood?...
person Saico
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very imaginative way of fitting a muggle into Hogwarts. I wonder what will be the other girls\' roles in this.
person Narcissa Black
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Be still my heart. Ron and Harry on one hand and Draco and Blaise on the other. I always go for the bad boys, so my choice would be clear, but somehow I think she might manage to keep them all on the hook. This story rocks.
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update update update!
person HealerAriel
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, sluttiness mixed with humor is, like, the PERFECT combination! I salute you, and anxiously await more of this hilarious goodness.