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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have checked for a few times for the sequel and was really glad to see it already posted!!!
Oh my is that really Draco? Or is it tom back from the dead in Draco\'s body? Got to have an update soon!
Very nice openning chap!
Oh my is that really Draco? Or is it tom back from the dead in Draco\'s body? Got to have an update soon!
Very nice openning chap!
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!!! *hates cliffies* This is awsome. I\'ve read the first part of the story and now this and think that this is one of the best HP fan fics I have read. *Beats Tom with a bat* Please tell me that that ass isn\'t coming back to life or suddenly appearing. Anyone who would treat Harry like that should be shot. ANYWHO, keep up the good work. I\'m adding you to my favorites so I can get the next chap. *Glomps*
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im so glad you are writting a sequel! it seems amazing so far! but whats with Draco? oh well, its amazing keep it up!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! I just read your first story today, and I thought it was fantastic! then I saw that there was a sequel! I was like soo happy!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey im really glad you started to write the sequal to your other story i was woundering when you wuold update cause your story wasnt on the list were all the stories are listed i only found it cause i went on to the list that said latest so maybe thats why no ones read your story well i donno it was just a sugestion any way i hope you update again soon
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, here a reviewer... lol! I like the idea, it seems as if Tom is Draco now! Will Cedric die also, as on the fourth book? I hope not...
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting about forced by hate and love and difficulty to see the difference
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Poor Harry! What happens in chapter 2?
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you\'re writing a sequel. Poor Harry, he can never be truly happy. Tom and Draco are kinda similar :/ Hope you update soon! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, at the very least the last line didn\'t sound *forced* (As you like to keep ending the chapters with the chapter titles.) I still think you need to add a *bit* more detail and not rush things. Long chapters are *good* chapters. Take your time and get all your thoughts out. Otherwise, I really like how you\'re story is coming out so far. Very nice!