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for Forever and Always

by BluKnight

person anonymous
schedule August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE! This is a marvelous story. I loved your first book especially and want to know what will happen.
person SeriousSiriusFan
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, I\'m new and all, but I\'m taking a good guess that Draco is not really Draco back from his trip early, but Tom. Just how, I dunno. And this may be weird and all, but I get this crazy deja vu feeling with Harry and Os scenes. Reminds me of Beauty and the Beast.

OS/BEAST:\"I *ORDER* YOU TO JOIN ME FOR DINNER!\"

HARRY/BEAUTY: \"I\'M NOT HUNGRY AND YOU\'RE GONNA EAT ME!\"

MWAHAHA!X3! Did you do that on purpose? LOl, this may sound weird, but is Os, Draco under some sort of spell? UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE^^!

Oh, and by the way, what happened to Sirius after Tom had him dragged away before his and Harry\'s wedding?
person firedragon
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...it looks like \'Os\' is a good guy or is he being good only a ploy to get into Harry?
Hoping your update won\'t take long.

Great chappie as always!
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 4! I wonder. The monster Os seemed hurt by Harry\'s words. And Draco has changed. Did Tom do something to him. Switch him maybe. Or someone else. Draco travels alot. Maybe he\'s really the monster and someone else is impersonating Draco.
person Deida
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s Draco isn\'t it! Something happened and Draco was placed in the body of a monster and now he\'s trying to make Harry realize what\'s happen because he can\'t exactly say what\'s happened. And something like a kiss or an I love you from Harry will bring him back to his original state!! ...... Well, that\'s just what I thought but anywayz, good fic, hope you\'ll update soon but you\'re already good at that so. Go you. A few grammatical errors though. But go you anyways.
person firedragon
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It looks like Harry will be under alot of pain,hurt and much more things now that he is a prisoner of a monster, i just hope that \'Os\' is more of an ally than an enemy.
UPdate soon!
person ura
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What\'s happening? Is OS actually Draco?
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Who is this Os really? What does he know of what Draco has become? I can\'t wait for chapter 3!
person Amor_Desastreux
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I get it now!
person Joana
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I\'m reading the clues right, Tom has possesed Draco\'s body but then, where\'s Draco? And who is the Monster? Love the story though, great, great, great... especially the prequel wich I always was \'eating\'! Lol... keep up the good job!