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man .. i hope harry is ok and how is stoping harrys mail ... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

I liked this story initially but as it went on it just got so amazingly confusing, it's like there are chunks missing and your continuing the story without these parts. Like I don't get how Harry is with the Dursley's because last I'd checked in James' will it said that all they had to do was have Dumbledore declare who the father was. And he did that, but then in this last chapter, Harry's with the Dursley's. Not only that when I went back to the chapter before that I don't even see the part with Fudge talking about James' will and taking Harry away. I'm thoroughly confused with this story. And I want to keep reading it but every time there's a new chapter it's like there's even more missing and it's really frustrating me.

Great. I love this fic. I was following it before AFF went down, and was really glad to see some new chapters.
I say twins for Remus and Regulus. I hope we get a better picture of Harry's life with the Dursley's. And, umm, a question, how did Fudge get Harry's eyes top be green, and can they be changed back. Well, can't wait for the next chapter. ^.^~

yes i think regulus should have twins ...i hope lucius can find out what the dursley have been doing to harry and can stop it or can get harry to live with them .. please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

Update!!!PLease? This is really good and I wanna know what happens...*whines*

...oh, my. Severus is getting an abortion..Is that the right word? I mean he is male..so I wouldn't know. That teaser for the next chapter..Fudge is such an idiot. I almost with Dumbledore had taken the job as minister instead of being headmaster of Hogwarts.

thank you 4 updating...damn fudge 2 hell 4 trying 2 separate lil' harry from his rightful family after his mama's death...and then his stupid action of capturing the innocent made sevvy thinks there's no hope 4 another baby in his life without siri...that bloody fool!!! anyway, i'll stay in tune 4 nother chapter! dont be too long, kay?

SQUEE!!! i usually dont like slash, but this is gewd!! Narcissa is so evil! mwahahahaaa!!

-wormey-

please please say he did not mean it ... please say he will keep his baby .... i hope they can get him out .... and where is lilly go ..please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel

Nooooo, don't let him terminate it!!! Well, of course you can you're the author. Well I'm enjoying this story so far, and can't wait for more. *shakes head: still can't believe Lucius is Harry's other father* oh well. again great story. Waiting. ^.^~