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for Give Me One More Chance

by ArchNemesis

person storm
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Storm like!!!! It's a good mix of the books with your own ideas... cool... Now, what happened to James????
person amyordinary
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! How have I never come across it??? Please update soon... now I have to go see what else you've written.... and I have five projects due monday and finals next week! you've ruined my GPA... thanks!
person angel
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man i hope they find james soon .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon .. later for now

angel
person IYYashi
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please I beg you!! Update soon, this is driving me crazy!!!!
person Jicky
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!! ok, first off, i usually don't do AU, and i definitely found James with Lucius an odd pairing, which i'd probably never go for. However! i've taken a deep liking to this fic! (thou i still prefer knowing the pairings beforehand. but i guess in this case it's a good thing.) the AU characteristics of this story are a bit hard to catch on in the beginning, but this story is quite well-written. i liked how u cut up ch6, as it was very properly done. however, i was disappointed that ch8 n 9 so short. because like all the other chapters, i like reading long chapters. i like baby Harry and Draco together, very cute. it's too sad to have Sirius away from Severus! T^T oh but i love the idea that James is still alive (althou stuck in Muggle world). i just wish stupid ppl would be get rid of from the story soon. can't wait to see happy family reunions! i'm all for happy ending~ XD
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you will update soon. I really like this story and wouldl ike to see what happens.
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really do hate fudge. the whole thing is just sooooo sad!! But still a great story!!
person D/H
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's different and i liked it very much..Your grammar needs work but otherwise, a great story..
I hope you update soon will this EVER turn into a H/D fic??
person Shell
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, this story is soooo good, just can't wait to read more.
person hannah
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This story is super fun!!!

I'm sorry James is gone and that Sev. Lost his twins... poor dude! I hope Lucius finds James soon and that Harry and his family can rejoin again.... One question: Where is Narcissa??.

I have no idea hoe do you manage family, work and such a demanding hobbie but anyway...Keep going!!!
bye
Hannah