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for Give Me One More Chance

by ArchNemesis

schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...ah. i just read chapters 1-5, and: OH MY GOD!! that was really good. you fit things in very well. you worked lily and james being in the house when they were killed, i mean- that's awesome! not awesome that they were killed, awesome that you made it fit the books that way. i- augh! i wish i could continue, but it's after 2:30am, so i'm going to bed!~
person rainbow
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahh!!!! when you put the teaser up for this chapter, i thought that sirius said hello severus, but i was wrong! update soon please!!!!
ASOTA
person Kat9jr
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay i finally have time to read for fun and i find an update to my favorite story. I'm so happy that Lucius found James and can't wait to see how things unfold when everyone finds out that James is alive. Keep up the great work.
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This a great story. Hope you update soon.
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg omg yay yay yay im soo happy u updated and i really like where u are going even if there are a lot of cliffies *pouting* plz update soon :D
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the scene about Lucius and James in the limo. It's just so cute and sexy.
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please update soon!!!! i need more!!!!
ASOTA
person Kat9jr
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you updated again. I Haven't been on the site much or i would have read and reviewed earlier. I loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one and yes I did think it was Lucius that came in.
person jaydubya
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep writing like this and you will have another fan for life. great story line and well written.