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for Give Me One More Chance

by ArchNemesis

schedule June 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

person Jan
schedule January 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus,😋 Please update chapter 29 soon.
person Kittykat575
schedule January 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Soooo awesome. Matt is in the doghouse. Siri won't ask yet. Too much more and he will.
person Jan
schedule December 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I absolutely love this story, poor Draco, I couldn't stop laughing when he straight up blamed Harry for their cousin being pregnant 😂 please update chapter 28 soon.
schedule December 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Calhoun maybe her soul mate. That would be kinda cool.
schedule December 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hi
love the story so far
just a note I have picked up in chapter 4 with the family tree
you put "Sirius Orion Black, bonded 1976 to soul mate Severus Snape
pending birth of son and daughter, estimated date: September 3, 1980
Mother of unborn children: Severus Snape"
so the twins were supposed to be a boy and girl according the tree. in this chapter you have both children boys.
I love the names by the way.
just thought you would like to know so that the tree can be changed or something.
other than that love this so far
cullengal101
schedule December 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hey
love this
however I figured out why I was confused with the snape/black twins.
I assumed because one of them was called Sheridan that it was a boy not a girl. so I thought they were both boys.
sorry my mistake
cullengal101
schedule October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn, and I thought we had relatively smooth sailing for a bit. There are so many things and so many ways they could go pare shaped. Siri isn't the most reasonable of mates... and there are at least two situations that could blow up on them, three if sev is preggers... four if you toss in James pregnancy.
Still, this is an awesome story and who ever it is that Sev has it in for can probably kiss their rear's goodbye.
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. i look forward to more.
Neh? a few questions if i could. How was lily managed to shield Har?
Poor Har just keeps getting dragged into things. I assume Har is still a Horcrux? Do Snape and such have knowledge of the Horcruxs?
I do hope Narcissa gets stomped and punted to the curb like the trash she is... child abusing slime. (I'd call her a bitch but bitches usually take good care of their pups.)
person JJay
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please please PLEASE update this soon!!!