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for Breaking Point

by Harvest

person Jags
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting
person roxierose13
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack! that is so sad! I\'ve never read any fic where Voldemort actually won. I guess you could say i\'ve never been inclined to, but I took a chance and read yours...I don\'t know what to say. It\'s sad and kind of ewww. no offense, but eww with Lucius. Is there going to be fixage in the future? please?? pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease...
person Devils Rhyme
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that\'s sad....but really, really delicious. I wish you had put more Lucius and Harry action in there...I love that pairing...
person Demon
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great I can\'t wait for the next chapter

I can\'t help but feel sorry for Harry
person Hambares
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is torture! Poor Harry!
person avihenda
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, I really like this one! :-) not very fluffy and very interesting in a dark kind of way :-) Hope you continue soon.
person Chell
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell?!! It was soooo good!!! Why did you stop? By the \'fin\' at the end I suppose it is supposed to be a one-shot. It works as a one-shot... However, I really think that this would be a good chaptered story. Great job, please continue!
person slasher
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOO! I love this story! It\'s just no dark, and HOT! I hope you write a lot more like this! Good Job! *pants*
person Hart
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful! And hurty. Ow. *slaps forehead* Quit being empathic.

Is there more?
person Ezekiel
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word: More.