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for Baby trouble.

by jaymclg

person DanielsLuv
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Think ur doing a wonderful job. Keep up the great work. Luved that lil part u added to eve (wtf her name was). Its bad enough when ppl dont review ur fics after uve taken the time to write them but to bad mouth is just plane shit! Its not like their any better then u are. Uve got talante and I hope u plan on writting more.
person tali
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
muy bueno
te quero mucho
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the funniest thing i have ever read ^_^ in a good way. Well written and a good plot line, etc. etc. i wish the real book turned out like this >.<
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To the person who posted above me, please do us all a favor AND SHUT YOUR BLOODY MOUTH >.>, its her story and as i think the some said ALTERNATE UNIVERSE!!!
person *****
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore is not his grandfather
person David
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like to say that I have very much enjoyed your story, and I\'m hoping that it is not over with as of chapter 15.
person random person 32
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it seems you haven\'t updated in a while, i hope this is just because you\'ve been busy with other projects and not that you\'ve given up on this story after that comment about \"bleeding eye\" from that stupid twat.

i for one would like to see how this stroy ends.
person angel
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ i love it i cant wait in till you next chapter i laugh sooo much with this story my sides hurt .... please update soon and in till then keep up the great work and later for now

angel
person Koppe
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First let me thank you for a great story -- I\'m loving it so far, and I\'m looking forward to more. I very much hope there will be Harry/Ginny -- and possibly Ron/Hermione and James/Lilly -- lime/lemmon
later... and perhaps a wedding, children or something. I also hope there will be more about the wolf-cubs... not to mention some revenge on Draco. BTW, is there another story setting up the pre-history of
Minerva and Albus together -- and being Harry\'s great-grnadparents? The only thing I want to critisize (and this is purely my personal opinion), is that you may be cramming too many story-lines (bond, cubs,
soul-mates, resurection, animangus,...) into one story (and just a few chapters)... I\'m sure you can handle it, but I\'ve seen lots of other fanfics becomming either superficial (as nothing is explored in
depth and nothing is ever resolved) or becomme accidently funny (because the author just spreads it on too thick). In any case, I\'m looking forward to more... keep up the good work.
-Koppe
person raija
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was bloody brilliant. Can\'t wait for more.