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Awesome is the only word that I can think of that can properly describe this story!
Ruby Cold

Well, I must say that it was roughly well written; I did find some grammar mistakes in there but, hey, who\'s perfect. Although I do have to agree with acid quill; you should put up a warning that your story is non-consensual otherwise you might offend someone who stumbles into it. Excellent story though. The characters were portrayed well and seemed in character for the most part. Nicely done, hope to read more of your work soon.

Wow!

All the while reading it I was thinking that this is a dream or some play acting on the characters\' part, but no, it\'s not. The warnings didn\'t say non-con, so I was still hoping. You may want to change your warnings.

As it is, the piece is quite well written, with emotions of anger dominating. I\'m surprised that Snape\'s emotions weren\'t part of it. It may have added much needed drama and insight.

Is this going to be continued? How many ways can Snape \'get back\' at Harry? Will Harry be able to reciprocate, somehow or at some point? or is he shattered and broken for good? This wouldn\'t be a fic where Snape has to break Harry down first, then built him up, would it???? *I say hopefully*

Keep up the good work and post again.

That was really good! Very descriptive and stuff. I loved it. Poor Harry! :-(

GREAT! More please... this could be continued in such a good way... I don\'t know how but I feel it. Please?

At the very least this should have a non con warning. The fact that you chose not to warn the reader is disgusting. As an author, you have a responsibility to your readers to put the proper warnings on your stories.

Yeah, I think this is your best work yet, m\'dear. <3

wow... just wow...