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for The Family Ties that Bind

by slygriff21

schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is coming along wonderfully, I am enjoying it more with every chapter I read! I loved it when Severus met Jocelyn again, it almost made me cry! There is so much emotion in your work, and it shows that you really do put your heart and soul into your story, sadly its a quality not every writer posesses. Well done, keep up the work, as long as you are writting, im reading! xx
person angel
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ..... im glad the training is coming along well and i know they will both be having good dreams ... i cant wait in till next time and in till then rememder love peace and fan fics ~giggles~ later for now

angel
person JTBJAB
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, now what would her dear daddy say if he knew what they had done??? lol

I look forward to your update!!!
person Andraea Shade
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is great. I hope you update soon.
person JTBJAB
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter - update soon please!
person Sommer
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Neville!!!! I love Neville.
Great part
person The Dark Child [Am a girl
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good please Huuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy and update
person angel
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow what a gift and i hope the plan work well in till next time later

angel

ps sorry for the small review i will make it up to you next time ...
person ChasteBlush
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, great story, i look forward to reading more, thanks,

x x x
person angel
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~sniff sniff~ that was beautifully.... yeahhhhhhhhhh snape ok ... ok he is alive ..... man i cant wait in till next chapter an in till then please keep up the amazing work and later for now

angel