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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first bad review I have ever given, but I have to say that I didn't enjoy this story very much. Everything seemed to be a bit rushed and there were a few grammar/spelling mistakes that stuck out to me like a sore thumb. I'm not trying to flame or anything, but it might have been more enjoyable if the plot was played out a bit more.
Although I came to this page to write a bad review, I must say that the whole idea of this story was a good one. Great imagination when it came to making Hermione who she was. The concealment charm that lasted until she was 18 was amazing to me. Another awesome idea was the descendants of the founders one. That was absolutely brilliant to me.
Keep writing and practicing, and if I come across anymore of your stories, I will try my hardest to remember to leave a review. Sorry it this offended in any way. I just think of it as constructive criticism.
Although I came to this page to write a bad review, I must say that the whole idea of this story was a good one. Great imagination when it came to making Hermione who she was. The concealment charm that lasted until she was 18 was amazing to me. Another awesome idea was the descendants of the founders one. That was absolutely brilliant to me.
Keep writing and practicing, and if I come across anymore of your stories, I will try my hardest to remember to leave a review. Sorry it this offended in any way. I just think of it as constructive criticism.
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one. You had a different slant on some things that I found enjoyable. I do like Snape/Hermione fics, but this Draco/Hermione one was really good. I liked your twists and turns.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome story i loved it!! loved the "Darling draco" line in one of the chapters!!lol
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely offering from the keyboard of Tiffany! Good progressive storyline (if a little rushed in parts). Great character interaction but I have one real gripe. There are some rather amusing spelling errors in this story. The law enforcers are referred to as 'Aurorers' not Aurors, Hermione looks like an 'Angle' when I'm sure Draco means Angel, the landlady of the 3 Broomsticks is called Rosmerta.....et al. However a really enjoyable work that I read in one fell swoop in about 4 hours!!!
Blessings to you and yours
Love Amethystique x
Blessings to you and yours
Love Amethystique x
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay a lovely story! Congratulations!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a happy ending for all! Well done, it is just a shame it is the end of the story!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do you watch charmed? hehe
there powers reminded me of that mixed with like the X-men..haha
sorry i dunno if thats where you go the inspiration..
well still lovin the story!!
keep me updated!
thnx Kristal
(emails:))
there powers reminded me of that mixed with like the X-men..haha
sorry i dunno if thats where you go the inspiration..
well still lovin the story!!
keep me updated!
thnx Kristal
(emails:))
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~sniff sniff~wow that was beautyfull i just love it and they name their baby girl after her mother that was great .... ~sniff sniff~ i just love all you work sooooo keep up the awesome work and cant wait in till your next story in till then later
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