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person Mella
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
teehee. that was just brilliant!
person North
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. AWESOME!!!!

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Two thumbs up!
person tenpura
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could not stop laughing during this whole thing. XD I can\'t imagine how unerotic that would have been...except you painted a pretty good picture but I really wish I\'d never imagined them without always having 100% amazing pervy sex.
God that was funny.
person Ruby
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA! The funny thing is how realistic you were able to make it. It was wonderful! Please make a sequal!
Ruby Cold
person Aroihkin
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious. XD
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody funny, and finally a realistic depiction of sex in fanfiction.
person Colene Creevey
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Muhahaha *evil grin*

That was priceless ^.^


I always try to inject as much realism into my fics as possible, but I admit that a quick cleaning spell is quite handy at times. >.^ I hate sleeping on the wet spot >.<


*lurks off to see if there are more fics like this to be found*
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do believe that is one of the most funny fics I have ever read. ROTFLMAO!!


Good god, we muggles to be pitied, eh? lol

Loved it, keep up the awesome work.
person WitchbladeHell
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! HOLY CRAP!!! That is the funniest slash fic I have EVER read!!!! Nice job, the hits just kept on coming!....Whoo....my sides hurt...
person woof
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found that hysterically funny and very accurate!!!!!!!