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I loved this chapter. Great job. Don\'t make Hermione agree to what Snape says in the end too easily though. Nice work.

Oh, I wonder who it will be.

I\'m sorry, but chapter 12 was far too much for me. the warning wasn\'t strong enough. Previous chapters were very well written and quite enjoyable, however, violent rape and the beating of a young girl is just not my thing. Because of the beatings, the graphic detail of snapes attack on hermione, and the lack of warning on the page, I found this rape truly disgusting, rather than distasteful as other \"rapes\" in other stories have been.

Please, if you\'re going to write a chapter like this. put a very blunt and very strong warning at the start of the chapter.

I read all 12 chapters. They were so good! I really thought he was going to get hermione. Her virginity i mean. That would\'ve been good. But he still got her in the end. maybe he can still have \"sessions\" with her. maybe she\'ll even like it. I liked the abuse. She needed a good spanking. Please write more. maybe hermione will bring him Ginny. that would be interesting. maybe a 3-way?

man .... snape is a every mean man and now miona had to bring him a virgin ... how dose he know that she will not go to the headmaster and tell him what snape did to her and what he want her to do and who will she bring to him and what will he do to her is she dose not do it .... well i cant wait in till the next chapter so please update soon and in till then later

angel

I dont think your \"warning\" at the start was strong enough. \"a little rough\" is NOT how I would discribe rape... because thats what that was. I was really enjoying this story up to this chapter and I would of avoided this one if you had given a PROPER warning. Please do so in future.

aaah, so she is gonna bring Ginny

heheheheh u evil!

I just read all the chapters, and this story is so spiffy. :) And, I certainly have the anxiety of waiting for your next chapter..

Looking forward to reading more!. Very interesting story...

something tells me that Sevvy will be none too happy.