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for Send Me a Virgin

by MistressDiana

person ana0391
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. You can just leave it there. She should work some werid kind of magic and get Severus off and they should compose a plan to take out all of thier enemies and take over the wizarding world so they can rule together as king and queen. Just a suggestion.
person Willa
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW I LOVE IT!! its really good. i want a sequel!
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok. As dark and wretched as this story was at times, it still drew me in.

If you are up to it, please write a sequel. Have Hermione testify but have her testify on his behalf and somehow manage to keep him out of Azkaban and still be able to take the potion so that they will both be immortal (after he tells her that she is also immortal and why/how). Just an idea.
person Sasha
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, you better write a sequel!!!!! I love this story and it can\'t just end like that!!!!!
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! Thanks for encouragement...I really want to continue this story but I feel a sequel is better than stringing this one out. Plus I want to add another POV (I\'ve mainly used Hermione and Snape). I probably won\'t start until the holidays as I\'ve got another story I just have to write (it\'s been in my brain for weeks).
person persephone
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Begins her chant. Sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel sequel.

I loved this story and I would love if you wrote the sequel. This story was very refreshing to all the sap on AFF right now.
person dragon34
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please do a sequel. I love it when Harry gets shot down, he\'s such a goody goody, Hermione really put him inhis place.
person Jonas
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want a Sequel!

Please
person angua
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!. It\'s very different and well written. But I don\'t think it needs a sequel, maybe only a epilogue to see what happen with Hermione and her immortality (years and years after). I also think that Snape is not worth of a future redemption for what he did (rape, manipulation, lies...). The final is perfect for him in your story. Congrats for your fic!. Hugs,
angua
person wendy
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You better write a sequel. This is the third story that has ended lately that I liked and the ending sucked! Open endings suck! Grr...