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Cool, i liked it but now that youve given a taste how about adding some more?

Great story, hope you\'ll write a few other one-shots with the captures of the half-veela, half-blood, pure-blood and mudblood in it, would be interesting.

you did make 1 mistake in this story though; you called daphne pansy once

Damn... until next time
Update NOW!!! or as soon as possible... whichever

is this a one-shot?? or just a short story

the story\'s titled Daphne\'s Capture....


SHE\'s ALREADY BEEN CAPTURED...so i guess thats it

The End

well that was a short chapter...but it was alright

update soon, SEE YA!!

damn my reviews suck!!

shit....i just noticed that your the author of Harry Potter and the Sisters Black

well that story was a great read...but i lost interest in it after Ron and Neville came into picture, are ya planning on doing something like that with this story??Hope ya focus on Harry as the main character in this story, cuz it seemed like Harry was pushed to the sidelines when Neville and Ron popped in HP and the SB, kinda killed for me anyways with them taking turns with the girls--kinda bordering on male to male slash, but hey!!...your the author, and it was really interesting though

Oh yeah, let me guess, Pansy\'s the pureblood.... Harry said; I have a half-Veela, a half-blood, a pure-blood, and a muggleborn

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Daphne reaches up and undoes Harry

One small mistake, you called Daphne Pansy in one instance. Aside from that, it is a good \'dark\' Harry fic. Will we see more chapters, and the other bindings?

nice will we see his other slaves in other chapters

nice rape scene, and another appeareance/variation of the servus secus curse as in ure other story, this story is definately continuable, good work.