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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m British, and I feel strangely ofended by this story. O_o Y\'know, we\'re not all \"Oh, I say! Perfectly smashing weather, what? Golly! Goodness, I appear to have a humongous bug up my arse! Oh well. Toodle-pip, old chap!\"-esque uptight 50\'s movie rejects. And England isn\'t all \"gray and dingy\" - someone for the love of god tell me that this isn\'t how ALL Americans think!
Oh, and this IS a Mary-Sue, seriously. It ticks all the boxes.
Oh, and this IS a Mary-Sue, seriously. It ticks all the boxes.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honey, this is a Mary Sue. No matter how hard you try to defend it, this is a Mary-Sue down to the little bit of her being European royalty. People on here can see a Mary Sue a mile away.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh look, another mary-sue, but I see you\'ve gone one step further and made her a mean hypocritical racist.
We really don\'t need more stories like this around... good luck in your future writing.
We really don\'t need more stories like this around... good luck in your future writing.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can you be racist to Europeans?! She\'s just defensive about her nationality, is all.
She\'s NOT a Mary Sue. She has some really bad flaws, and they\'ll come out later when she explains about her past.
She\'s NOT a Mary Sue. She has some really bad flaws, and they\'ll come out later when she explains about her past.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Tom Marvolo Riddle/Lord Voldemort is the LAST descendant of Slytherin. Does you knowing the meaning of the word \"last?\" It means that your little Sue can\'t be descended from Slytherin. Also, I don\'t see anything in your very short chapter that makes it suitable for this website. Why must you force people to scroll pass this crap in search of decent fics?