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for Once Upon A Blue Moon

by ldkelly

person antipyro
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is absolutely terrific.

I just love the way you write previous sequences then flash to the present.

Your writing is very clear, easily understood and rife with realism. I laughed when Angel was identified as gay too, what with Ron trying to set them up, lol

I know that future chapters will have the missing information of what really did happen at Snape\'s house.

One thing, I don\'t understand is why Harry started to cry out when he found out it was Severus he slept with. Didn\'t he like the man? Or is this a case of he didn\'t know what he wanted, even if it was right in front of him???

Great story, please, please post soon.
person Angie/les
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I am liking it. Please update soon. It would make me so darn happy.
person silverfox
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovly chapter keep up the great work and update soon
person silverfox
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting so far i\'m enjoying it so update soon and keep up the good woek