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for Once Upon A Blue Moon

by ldkelly

person antipyro
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely beautiful. I\'ve never read so touching a story with Severus being a virgin. I hope Harry sees it too.

I really love this story, it has most if not all the qualities of a great fic. Please don\'t stop posting.

Thank you, again.
person Rane
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was sketpical of this story upon reading its premise, but I\'m so glad that I decided to give it a go. The new characters are fantastic and the story is great! Can\'t wait to read more!
person Colene Creevey
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Muhahaha

I can just imagine Harry\'s panicky expression when he spotted Severus in that bed. ^.^
I love this story, the switching between present and past, and the fact that it is coherent and actually (despite magic ;) seem plausible.
I must admit though that I hope that when Harry said that the child\'s father was dead he was lieing. >.< I am a sucker for happy endings.

Have now added this story to my favourites.
Keep writing, and I will keep reading. ^.^
person Angie/Les`
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a cute story. Please update again soon!!!
person fragonknight01
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Sevvy really dead? I like your Angel- she is a really sweet drunk! And poor Harry!!! Hurry up with the next chapter.
person sethian
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue it, it is really good...will severus really die? or was it just a lie from Harry? I hope he won\'t they make such a nice couple ^.^
person miyuki
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh so you update, YAY! and te chapter was simply great. things are strating to look for harry and snape FINALLY! i really hope ebony can bring them together, they have suffered so much. This was a brilliant chapter. i can\'t really wait for the next one.
person Angie/Les
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha harry totally got screwed over. Literally. Well update soon cuz I\'m loving your story and I normally hate mpregs cuz they always turn out all light and fluffy.
person vash_the_dork
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. Drunk!Harry is just so much fun.

on an editorial note hoping is the active verb formation of hope, hopping is the form of hop. JUst the last paragargh or so. Really it just came out of left field, your grammar has been better than most.
person silverfox
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter keep up the great work and update soon