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for Summer Love

by slygriff21

schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. You just can't beat a good HGSS romance. After reading most of your stories I realized that you frequently misspell Apothecary. Usually you spell it Apocrathy. Another bit of constructive criticism that you might think about is how you punctuate your sentences that contain quotation marks. Here is an example from your story:

"It has a ballroom that can hold over 2,000 people and the most beautiful gardens.
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person ~*~Tasha~*~
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
{claps, cheers and smiles} Lovely fic.
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Amethystique
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC!!! My favourite author on AFF and each of her fics is exceptional! Love your work LOL ;o)X
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I just can't take this anymore. Good story, BUT...... It's BLAISE!!!!!! not Balise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That had me cringing about as bad as when people say "Seltic" when they mean "CELTIC"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please fix this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


On a better note.......

"Aunt Marianne and Uncle Christopher Brandon"

Hmm..... Someone's an Alan Rickman fan.......

lol.
person Willa
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww i really liked it!!!
person angel
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~crys ~that was sooooooooo beautyfull i love it and ~sniff sniff~ im glad harry is ok and everyone had a happy ending that was a wonderfull awesome story i cant wait in till you next one and keep up the awesome work on your other ones so in still next time later

angel