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Well done! I really like this fic. It kind of reminds me of \'The other side of darkness\' where Snape is on the run from both sides and has to turn to Granger for help. You have explored several good thoughts here too. Snape could indeed be no longer \'trusted\' by the DL and also could be seen as a big liability since he was recognized as the one who killed Dumbledore (all the others, with the exception of Grayback, were in thier DE garb - Snape was not!) I also liked the way you put us in Snapes thoughts just hours after the death of Dumbledore and his need for release. Often (or I have read) after a very adreneline rushed experience, the body is very sexualy aroused (especially men). It would actually make sense that Snape needed physical release after the trama of such an emotional experience as killing of someone so close as Albus and the ending of his 15 years of safty at Hogwarts. This has been the first \"new\" fic I have seen that really begins to explor what might happen to our dear Snape now that HBP has been released. Keeping him in the unsung hero status may be hard for some people now (what prats!) Thank you for starting this fic and I look forward to more chapters!

This is satisfyingly good, I must say! Like your style lots, but try not to rush your descriptions too much, and avoid using terms like \"shithole\"cause it\'s not very descriptive, try something that will tell us more about the place etc, and to set the scene. Oh, and in England, we don\'t say \'blocks\' we say \'streets\'instead!!!!I really want to hear what is going to happen now, you are off to such a great start, so I will be checking back!

great start. looking forward to reading more.

Fantastic! Can\'t wait to read more. Hope to see an update soon. I really love how you\'ve continued the story! I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the fantastic work!

Ohhhhh! Very interesting story so far! How will Hermione react? I can\'t wait to find out! Please update again and soon!

Tiffany

wow awesome please continue...update soon please!

Great start. I\'m looking forward to seeing how Snape is going to work this out with Hermione. Is her going to appeal to her intellectual side? That\'s about all the could possibly work with her alliance with Harry and the Order. She will not be quick to convince. Good Luck! I\'m looking forward to your progress.

Awesome start!! I can\'t wait to see how Hermione reacts to being chosen!!

This is a fabulous start! Looking forward to seeing where you\'re going to take it.