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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a wonderful first chapter! i love the way you made him seem all worn out and too sad to even be desperate. grand work!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another really wonderful chapter! The snog with Narcissa was really fun. It would just fall into place that she was not really interested in being in debt to him and to use it to her advantage! HA! Good visual of Snape running naked with his cloths bundled up! This story is very well paced and keeps the reader just waiting for the next exciting moment! Your plot blends in very well with cannon too! LOVE this story!!!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO!!! Snape stared dumbfounded as Narcissa threw herself at him.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Er. Intriguing, very intriguing. I think you\'ve got the conflict of Snape down to a tee. I know in my heart of hearts that he is still on the side of good, but I guess he sometimes has trouble remembering it. looking forward to the next installment.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY COOL!!! I love it! I hope you\'ve got more coming soon! YEAH! Post HBP stories rock!
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now this is exciting! More! Please! Soon! :)
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very intriguing start! I\'m very sorry there isn\'t a second chapter yet. But this is one I will definitely follow!
~Lisa/LariLee
~Lisa/LariLee
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
April, I\'m delighted to see you\'re taking on the task of redeeming Our Boy after HBP. I\'ve enjoyed all of your stories and am de-lurking for the first time to say so. You\'ve got a very interesting start to your story and have certainly whetted this reader\'s appetite for more. I eagerly look forward to where you\'ll go next!
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi April,
Great to see how busy you have been - looking forward to reading your other recent stories. What a fascinating start and great plot. You are rebuilding my faith in the intriguing git again. I was worried when the AK hit. I am looking forward to see how he manages to improve the mess he is in. He works best in those circumstances. Come to chat tonight. Lots of love, Pauline
Great to see how busy you have been - looking forward to reading your other recent stories. What a fascinating start and great plot. You are rebuilding my faith in the intriguing git again. I was worried when the AK hit. I am looking forward to see how he manages to improve the mess he is in. He works best in those circumstances. Come to chat tonight. Lots of love, Pauline