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by whiterose

person Lanta
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Original idea, interesting, but I'd be more comfortable if Harry managed to convince someone else that is was rape, rather than the other way around... personally I'm not sure I'd *want* to be the 'true son' of someone that would do that to me, lol. And a Harry/James confrontation scene would definately seem like a good idea.
person JJ
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!!
In such an AU, why does Harry have to be careful? Is Voldy still around? After so many years? You'd think they'd have gotten him by now.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for chapter 5! They fell asleep? Are they crazy? They're at Malfoy Manor. Oh this could be bad!
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 4!
person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story
hermione and ron are too f*****g nosy!!!
damn!
I hate them! I wish harry had a little more backbone and would tell them to back off!
hehe
me and my issues! (sorry, I'm feeling a little hostile! :D...my time of month...)
person BadAss1
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE It kinda scary but like more
person Misread
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore the concept of the story until now, I just have thing to point out: In the third chapter, you say Draco signs with D, in case the lettre is intercepted...but it has the Malfoy crest on it...see my point? :)
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story
person momoko
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good but where is the rest?!!!!!!!