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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I must say though I\'m surprised about the tense thing. Practically every fic I\'ve read is written in present tense. You are the person narrating the story as its happening. Movies are present tense, TV shows are present tense. I just found that strange that anyone would say that. Hell even JKR writes in present tense, except for when she is describing something that has happened in the past.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If that had been me, I would have screwed the fact Malfoy was there and answered the question instead of my mother to hope that she remembered that she was supposed to say \'no\'!
Man, I don\'t think I would ever be able to see her again, cause all I would want to do is shout and yell!
Great chapter, well done!
And ignore the idiots who don\'t like this story, it is GREAT!
Man, I don\'t think I would ever be able to see her again, cause all I would want to do is shout and yell!
Great chapter, well done!
And ignore the idiots who don\'t like this story, it is GREAT!
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE your fic and I hope you continue writing it. And I also hope that your dental surgery goes well.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what a straight aaaaaaa asshole is lucius. Poor Hermione. I love this chapter,
Hope u can update really soon. What a kind of mother would marry her daughter to deathearter? but doris doesn\'t know. He was charming too. UPDATE REALLY SOON.
Hope u can update really soon. What a kind of mother would marry her daughter to deathearter? but doris doesn\'t know. He was charming too. UPDATE REALLY SOON.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens. I just knew Doris was going to forget and cave but poor Hermione! Hopefully Lucius won\'t be all bad? (he has to be a little evil or he wouldn\'t be Lucius) Can\'t wait to see what\'s next!
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE. MAKE THE THIRD CHAPTER REALLY LONG. WE\'LL BE SATISFIED FOR TWO WEEKS OR LESS. LOL
PLEASE. I\'M STARTING TO LOVE HERMIONE AND LUCIUS FANFIC.
PLEASE. I\'M STARTING TO LOVE HERMIONE AND LUCIUS FANFIC.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I can\'t read about the son, why not the father. I didn\'t hermione and lucius fanfiction could be so romantic, sexy dangerous and all of the above. update really soon, this my first time reading a hermione and lucius fanfic and I absolutly love it. update really soon.. I love this story so much. Even though i\'m a hermione and draco shipper I\'m starting to like hermione and lucius, also. Hope to here from you really soon.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really like the beginning. There are so few Lucius/Hermione stories out there and this one has promise. Can\'t wait to see more!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting, it left me with a lot of questions.
Looking forward to reading more.
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo ho! I liked it, Lucius is still in charecter and yet it is still going to be Lucius/Hermione. For a few seconds after the last lines I had visions of Lucius as a Step-father and it amused me. can\'t wait to read more!
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