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by meleighme

person YamiNoWedge
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... I just read chapter 4, and I was wondering if you skipped a chapter... because apparently it went from just hermione and draco knowing to the entire school in a small amount of time, and it mentioned something that Snape had said - even though he hadnt said it so far. I dunno. I can\'t wait to see what Draco does when Harry gets to the Astronomy tower.
person RAzzle
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was hot. you have to finish this, I\'m completely hooked on this story. And the silliness in it makes it even better. Please update soon
person Leanan
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap woman!!!!!!!!!!Very very hot...................I want more......... What a fabulous brithday prezzie!!!!!!!

Oro Membrana!!!!!!! Oro Membrana!!!! Damn...........

Leanan
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is getting so damn interesting! I can\'t wait for them to meet! *jumps around in glee* It\'s such a fantastic story. Thank you for sharing it with us!
person Alexa
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful to the point of being poetic. Some parts were just works of art! The look on the boys\' faces... oh...
And the fact that \'it\'s all Snape\'s fault!\' Hahaha
person lulu
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dammit! you had to end it there, didnt you?!?!?!?! very, very nice, and hoooooooooooot story, though. please update soon.
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh too funny! Way too many people are enjoying these stories! Including Draco! I can\'t wait for chapter 4!
person YamiNoWedge
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this story so much! I think it\'s been a while since I was so thoroughly amused. And I love that you updated twice in a 24-hour period. Maybe we can get three chapters next time? ^_~ Update soon!
person zentiis
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh Bravo!
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person Akusaa
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* This is so bloody funny! Update soon please?