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for Hermione and Draco

by MyaMalfoy

person Anon
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks fo writing such a great fic! It was such a great fic. It was one of the best fics I ever read! I usually only give reviews to the fics are really good. Please update soon. Thanks again!

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person Anon
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks fo writing such a great fic! It was one of the best fics I ever read! I usually only give reviews to the fics that are really good. Please update soon. Thanks again!
I loved the you let the caracters express themselves on how they feel. You should really consider being a writer.
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person Latricia
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is now 12:30 a.m. and I had to read this before i go to bed. So i\'ll try to write this as quick as i can.

Man. That was alot of crying. I mean, I know that you said that this Draco is nothing like the books and I knew that from the start, but Damn, I don\'t think I would ever see him cry that much. What a change, a good one, but a change nonetheless.

I like the comment when Hermione said that Draco and Ron are so different. They are like night and day. A few things flashed in my head and I was laughing.

Harry\'s dream was like whoa! I mean Lucius going to the wedding and told Draco to chose. I know Draco would die for her. Please don\'t make him, Draco, die. I would so cry. Anyway, moving away from the flipping dream now...

Thank you so much for putting the length of their marriage. It makes me more comfortable with the story. And it shows me that after 4 years of marriage, Ginny is still an independent woman. She has her husband wrapped around her finger, to an extent, and vice versa.

For Draco\'s childhood story. I was so shocked when i saw the word rape. My eyes almost popped out of my head. But thank Merlin you didn\'t write the details. I don\'t think i would have made it. I would have been bawling.

I was wondering what does Draco have to do at Azkaban Prison. Isn\'t Luicus dead (I can\'t remember. I think you did mention it, but...Forgive me if you have mentioned it before; which i\'m sure you have.)

I wonder where Ron is and why he came back. What ever happened to the American girl he was suppose to go with on his wedding day. Did she leave him, he leave her; what?

I hope Ron doesn\'t try to do anything to Hermione while she is at the burrow. (I know he isn\'t allowed back there, but i think he can find other ways to get into the house.)

I think that about sums up my ideas for the time being. Expect more ideas/comments/etc. When the next chapter comes out.

Until next chapter

xoxo

Latricia
person KrazyKiwi
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I don\'t want to think about what Harry\'s dream means. Too ominous! It was beautiful how everyone comforted Draco in his time of need and I can\'t wait until he and Hermione are back together!
person Stephanie
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chappie. Draco, you dork! Don\'t be pissed that she doesn\'t get married right away!
person Latricia
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn. This story is getting better by the chapter. It is now...12:30 a.m. and I\'ll make this quick because i have to go to work tomorrow. I love how he, Draco, broke down when was classified as a best friend and the exchange of the words willy to pussy. So funny.

I love the slip up when Draco was in the bed with Hermione. I think they would make the perfect couple and I\'m happy they got together; but... Ron is a completely different thing. I know that he\'s probably cooking up some scheme to get Hermione back or hurt if not physically harm Draco so Hermione wouldn\'t want him. I can\'t wait to see what he does.

I totally agree with Ginny. I think that punch wasn\'t only about Buckbeak, I think it was a combination of anger and sexual frustration of some thought (funny thought but could happen.)

I was wondering how long Harry and Ginny was married? I don\'t remember if you mentioned it before but i don\'t recall it.

I know that Draco couldn\'t have a good childhood. Don\'t get me wrong, this story shows his lavish lifestyle but he had no real friends. He only had dumbfounded nitwits and money-grabbging whores around him. I can\'t wait until he explains himself to the Potters in the morning.

This story is so going in my favorites. This is amazing and refreshing at the same time.

Why not take up writing for a side job. I\'m not sure if it pays alot but you would sure sell alot. (just a thought. And i\'ll buy the first copy just to be fair)

Finally, I like how Harry tries to portray himself as the dominate on in his household (or at least his marriage) but i could clearly see that they are both neutral in the situation. And i like it.

Until the next chapter...
person KrazyKiwi
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea! You updated! I was so excited reading this. I knew Ginny would be a good friend and that she and Harry would understand. Again, thanks for writing it!
person Aunt Bijou
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are positively devious!! You are sooooo twisted! I love it! Heh heh heh... Can\'t wait to see what happens next! Now chain yourself back to that keyboard and WRITE!!!
person Elmo
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving the tears...a little out of character but HeY! thats wut fanfiction is for
person Jackie
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Frankly your story makes me gag it\'s so sickly sweet. Draco is so out of character!!!