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for Hermione and Draco

by MyaMalfoy

person KrazyKiwi
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I shall be waiting anxiously!
person Maryp!
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate Ron... what son of a bitch! But please continue. I had some ideas in mind and I was hoping you had the same ideas as I, but well... I don\'t think so. Please update!!!
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on Mya!! Where are the next chapters? Im sat here fizzing away in anticipation for more! Your story is addictive! :D xx
person GOD!!!
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL!!! YOU ARE PURE EVIL!!!
person Pastel
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder who is the one helping Lucius. Is it Ron? Great chapter. Update soon.
person ancientgirl
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I knew it was too good to be true. I like your story, but I\'m praying you don\'t drag this angst out chapter after chapter. I\'m sorry but I don\'t read angst, but I realize that sometimes a certain amount is needed. I\'ll give it a go for a bit and see how long it lasts. Good chapter though.
person Allison
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH I hate cliffys update soon please cause i am on the edgw of my seat...
person Latricia
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s now 1:40 a.m and here goes the review; I\'ll try to make this quick as possible:

I\'m actually not mad at you for this chapter, I actually love this chapter; excluding the letter part. I\'ll give you items in order.

I know for a fact that Draco would never hurt her, I mean he\'s Draco but then that damned letter had to fly in the room hey? *shakes head* So sad.

I don\'t think that Hermione should have blushed. If she didn\'t nobody would have guessed. They would eventually find out but not in the front of everyone at that time. But I like it, nonetheless.

Shit! I knew Ron would appear in the house. It just seems natural. Being that he is dumbwitted when it comes to certain things, he would forget the comment about him not coming back to the there at this rough time.

I had a feeling that Lucius was there; at Azkaban. He just had to be there. I see no other logical reason for him, Draci, to go there but i like the bubble idea. I wish i could use that sometimes, but it\'s never going to happen. *sighs*

Lucius\' comment about Hermione\'s death reminded me of Harry\'s dream. I believe that could have been a premonition, and that could be one of the reasons why he couldn\'t remember it. *shrugs shoulders* It could happen

Omigosh! I almost had a mild heart attack when Hermione pointed her wand to Ron\'s bits and said \"Evanesco.\" I am so serious about that heart attack. I had to pause the story to take a few calm breaths. I almost stopped breathing, and then i burst out laughing. I guess you better not piss of Hermione when she\'s mad. His bit\'s just shrivelled up. LOL If I was there I would have rolled around on the ground laughing because he couldn\'t do anything but groaned and cry. That is sweet revenge *smiles evilly*

I feel so sorry for Hermione. I mean, she gets a letter from Draco, stating that they can\'t be together, must have really torn her up because she had a nervous breakdown; but can even remember it. But what I can\'t understand is why she didn\'t suspect that, it seemed quite wrong. I mean he just told her he loved her before she left and then he sends her a letter stating that they should break up. She must have thought that there has to be a reason or something but i guess her love for him, blocked her suspicious conscience.

I can\'t believe Ron would try to portray Draco as the bad guy. Saying that he will break her heart and completely forgetting that he broke her heart the day before leaving her at the alter. What a jackass.

I actually know who the spy for Lucius is but, I\'m not going to say it because it will ruin the surprise. {At least I hope I\'m right, but not knowing if i\'m right or wrong, I won\'t call the name}

I so happy you wrote this chapter. It makes some of my questions clear up a bit but I hope you write more.

xoxo

Latricia
person JeremySumpter
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Good story!
Please Please Please put more up.
It is too good to stop!

Lots of love!
-Zarah<3
person KrazyKiwi
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah... poor Hermione! I\'m sure Draco will come through in the end ... right? Hopefully. Please update soon and thanks again for writing!

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