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by ShaneCPhillips

schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo it can\'t end like that! it was to short and to quick why? *sniffle*
person Evangela_fira
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay im reviewing this after chapter 4(5)
so far a great job, far too many people gloss over the romantic side in a good femslash story, which i guess is there loss
anyway what compelled me to write here was to point out that with hogwarts being in britain and all technically what happened isnt illegal, theres no actual age limit for consent between two willing females, and failing that the age of consent for a straight woman is 16
if you\'ve already had this pointed out and have covered it with some reference to wizarding law later on then i apologise
keep up the good work
xxx
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! you can\'t kill Tonks!
person Kateri Lestrange
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very awsome you have a knack for writing. Keep it up and up-date soon it would make the story even more interesting if Hermione was actually going to have Tonks kid due to what happened in that one chapter and they had to face that and deal with it or well atleast i think so just a seguestion i\'ll keep reading either way this story is awsome.
person Valkos
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just finished reading chapter 10 and I must say... I am truly looking forward to more stories about Tonks and Hermione. Like any good story, it pulls you in and the only thing that disappoints the reader is that you read the lsat line, but haven\'t finished the story. I can\'t wait for the next story...

Valkos
person toria
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa that was close for tonks and hermione. rita better keep her pen down and let um be. keep writin
person Animosity
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowzers. This story is really good. There\'s a great plot, and everything is running very smoothly. I hope you update soon-ish...and yea...I hope this review is enough encouragement for you.
person Reficul
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story!! Please don\'t quit!!!
person April
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that night really sucked for Tonks. Update soon please.
person ApriL
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like the story so far. Update soon please.