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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was awesome. please update soon, i'll be ur friend forever. please send me an e-mail telling me u did so i know, thanks, Laterz
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the story, and I have to say that I do truly enjoy it. I think you have a real flare for writing and I can\'t wait to read more.
I do have one small issue with Lucida. She seems to have recaptured some amount of happiness and fairly quickly. Perhaps it is to early in the story, and shouldn\'t draw attention yet but, it just seems to soon for her to feel better. When you do the things to yourself that you describe you don\'t recover that quickly. I am sure you have had some experience, you know all to well some of the emotions that can follow certain cases. I just wanted to bring it up to help with character believablity.
Other than that one small thing, that truly doesn\'t ruin the story...well let me just say there isn\'t enough room here for me to rave on and on about how happy I am to have found this story. PLEASE...PLEASE continue writing this intriguing tale.
I do have one small issue with Lucida. She seems to have recaptured some amount of happiness and fairly quickly. Perhaps it is to early in the story, and shouldn\'t draw attention yet but, it just seems to soon for her to feel better. When you do the things to yourself that you describe you don\'t recover that quickly. I am sure you have had some experience, you know all to well some of the emotions that can follow certain cases. I just wanted to bring it up to help with character believablity.
Other than that one small thing, that truly doesn\'t ruin the story...well let me just say there isn\'t enough room here for me to rave on and on about how happy I am to have found this story. PLEASE...PLEASE continue writing this intriguing tale.
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow wow this story has so much going for it i hope you give us an pdates soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I LOVE THIS STORY
I LOVE THIS STORY
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! Brilliant! It\'s not entirely descriptive, and the abreviations get kind of annoying...you know \"Ms. Pal-- DADA, that sort or thing. But other than that I love the story. I don\'t entirely mind that Snape is really out of character, \'cause the rest of it is wonderful. Keep up the great work!
PS. I can\'t *believe* you left it hanging right there! ::Laughs:: Owell...
PS. I can\'t *believe* you left it hanging right there! ::Laughs:: Owell...
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooo your sooo mean , leaving me hanging... update quick i cant wait 4 more xxxx
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you ever need any help with a story just let me or contact me and i\'ll help :) i\'m only a few clicks away hun xx
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm... ok, well I love this story so far, so I\'ll forgive you for not updating :-P 5 stars!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brill i love ur fic, please update soon xxx
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. I almost cried everytime you described the hurt in her eyes. Poor Sanpe, having to go through all of that just to make sure the love of his life lives. Hey, mabey he can teach her Occulnedkjhsdf.... what ever that word is. I\'m too damn lazy to get up and look through one of my books. Ah well. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more. :)
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter .... just a bit upset it wasn\'t longer :( was really getting into it lol. Anyway hun I can\'t wait for the next bit! You\'ve left me in suspense abotu whats going to happen next. Right well i\'m off! Please update soon ..... it\'s a GREAT story xxx