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by freakenbree

person Anon
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sev in stocking and bra and lacy underwear...maybe a corset too... lol ouch... hey! you were the one that ...(well, it was technically harry, but you were the one that typed this..) suggested that snape was a moody, tall, dark woman...not my fault that my weird mind came up with those stuff!! O_O *shudder*..it's a good story^^ please update soon! i'm looking forward to the next chapter :D now i'm off to look at your other fics ^^

~Clara
person dfntgrl
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going!!
person Kana
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Harry Severus... *Starts dreaming while she should be typing the review...*
Oh, yes, sorry ... I was off again. *Sheepisch grin* Couldn't help myself. I so love this story. Really, you have to post that next chapter soon. I'm longing to read more... :)
It's a great story! Honest! So, please, update soon, because I really, really wanna read what's gonna happen next.
Keep up the wonderfull writing!!

Hugs
K
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story, are you going to finish it? i hope so!
person antipyro
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting story line, against a flurry of slung dungbombs, I like how you\'ve handled the romance part. Just plunging head long into the sex part, yes it\'s what we want, but we also want the build up, the reasons why and the reasons why not. We want to savour and have it roll around our minds for a bit, before committing to a definate YES!

Lucius, ya, damn sexy, almost as much as Severus, but with a bit of a mean streak, depending on how he\'s written. Always with more of a mysteriousness to him. Never can really trust him, can you? Well, any Slytherin really.

Please write more, take your time and post whenever.
person Bree
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. Hahaha, I saw that as I was reading, Joey...thank you. Um as far as the next chapter, it is underway. I am having a bit trouble with writing it though since I\'ve been working so much, so please keep your patience. I hope to have it done by Monday.

Loves,
Bree
person Joey
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Going along well so far, I await the next update eagerly. My only CC for this chapter is that it\'s \"long haul\" not \"long hull\". Unless you\'re refering to an unusually long ship, in which case, hull is completely reasonable. ^^
person Angie/Les
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry but I\'m not a big fan of Lucius. HGe just hits a wrong string with me and annoys me.Keep going and update soon.
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i look forward to read more of this great story.
person Missi
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re welcome, and I love this fic! Why oh why oh why don\'t these boys just sit down and COMMUNICATE!! I spelled that wrong, but the basic idea is there. Anyway, thanks for updating and I can\'t wait for more!