rate_review Reviews

This has a plot! I\'m amazed (and a little grumpy, you know how long it took to find a story that wasn\'t all sex and had a little imagination to it? Or in your case, a lot?), and I also love this. *beams* So, naturally, I\'m going to ask for more. Kisskiss!

McDonald\'s?! How could you?! That would completely ruin his perfect complexion! Hrumph. Good, though ;)

Maybe his/her hair was real.. I\'m not too sure. I mean it LOOKED real, like lots of gell. Then again.. you never know. >.< I dyed my hair recently (not really recently but right after I did it..) and people asked if it was a wig because the color was so bright. So maybe it was.. a wig and just because I was at a con I thought it was real because I\'m used to that sort of thing?
Nya! Anyways! <3 Draco is so silleh. But oooh so smexyful. And I\'d say he\'s tall. Compared to my 5\'2\".. Or supposed. I think I\'m taller.. but I have nuuu idea.

To Shinigami24 (even though you probably won\'t read this I wanna rant, too!)
Iiiii.. have suspicions about Snape. I mean.. seriously.. he had NO choice at ALL whether or not to kill Dumbledore. Since he made the unbreakable vow. And if you remember, he hesitated and stuff when he was gonna be all \"Yes I will do Draco\'s mission if he fails.\" And such. AND! The biggest thing... What if.. Just IF.. he didn\'t do it at all? If he said some other spell that shot out a green light (I\'m sure there\'s plenty) in his head. You know.. NON VERBAL SPELLS LYK OMG NOO I MEAN YESS?!?! You never know.. Seriously. Snape could be nice... *Pets him.*

Ooooooo! This is getting really good!!!

Now it gets confusing!

Her master? Oh you did answer some questions but you set up more! Blue tipped owl? I need chapter 3!

this is really good please continue. bribes with cookie pocky and pudding.

I don\'t know why Draco\'s so mad! Since Hogwarts has never been safe for Harry since he started his first year! If Hogwarts is SO safe, how come Quirrell was able to set a foot in school, while he had Voldemort in the back of his head?! Surely someone WHO knew him before he met Voldemort would have had noticed that Quirrell had changed! 2rd year-basilik, and Tom Riddle! Last time I checked a 10 ft snake that can kill with only a look, IS NOT even remotely safe! 3rd year-Sirius\'s escape, and Dementors! Demonters that can suck out a person\'s soul SHOULD NOT be within 5 ft of the school! And yet they were able to get to Harry 2 times! 1st time- the Hufflepuff vs Gryffindor match! 2rd time-Harry tried to help Sirius! 4th yr-Poly-juice anyone? If Dumbledore KNEW Moody for SO long, HOW come Crouch jr didn\'t get caught until after Voldie returned?! 5th yr-Umbridge! She used truth potion, and tried to poison Harry with it! Plus she tortured students with the blood quill! She even tried the pain curse-the EXACT same curse that Bellatrix used to drive Neville\'s parents insane! And Umibitch is STILL runnning around free in the 6th book! That pisses me off! WHy haven\'t anyone pressed charges against her?! Surely the student\'s parents canot be blind to NOT notice the scars from the blood quill?!!! 6th year-wellSnape and Draco killed Dumbledore off... AND Dumbledore trusted Snape SO much! *scoffs* I have been wondering WHY the fuck Dumbledore kept a Death Eater in the school! Even in spite of Snape torturing several students-namely Neville and Harry! He mind-raped Harry during 5th year! He told Voldemort the prophecy signing Harry and Neville\'s death warrents! For all I know Snaoe could have known that Wormtail was the spy all along, and kept silent because of a stupid grudge! Well, sorry to piss you off, but I NEVER trusted Snape! And his behaviour has been getting worse over the years!

More keep up the good work