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for Sinful Behavior

by bbluebabies

person Steph
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
? you seem to be missing chapter 6 its a repeat of chapter 5?

other wise very enjoyable so far

keep writing
person a - m
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
too bad chapter 6 is the same as chapter 5 and there is none after chapter 8 - but still, nice story. maybe some you\'ll even write a little more... ? cheers, a
person Era
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story please add more to it. It fasinates me and I find to be quite interesting.
person RandH4ever
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In one paragraph, you call Ginny \"Ginerva\", but in the next you call her \"Virginia.\" Which one is it? Pick one and stick with it!
person mione
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeay, you updated!
I\'m eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
person ashley
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm did you know that chap.5+6 are the same....well other than that the stroy was great!!!


but dont make that mistake the next time otay....laders
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
blaise isn\'t a girl btw
person lara
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it but why did you post ch. 5 twice?
person annelise
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh my goodness. I absolutely love this fanfic! Hurry and update I can\'t wait to read more!
person chelsea
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seriously update. NOW!