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for Sinful Behavior

by bbluebabies

person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just to let you know, you skipped chapter 6. What you have on ch. 6 is just repeating ch. 5. so there is a big gap in the story. I hope you can fix this soon cause I would like to continue this wonderful story without confusing myself. (which I do often enough in feel life) Thanks. P.S. I think this a very good story. I can't wait to read more.
person Bob
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying the fic, there\'s just one thing that\'s bothering me. The writing style is good, but you have to make up your mind.. is Ginny\'s full name Ginerva or Virginia? You switch every other line, and it starts to get annoying. Otherwise, the fic is well written. (:
person Draguna
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story. i really like it and i hope you update real soon.
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person Katie
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your chapter 6 isnt right. You have chapter 5 in its place.
person dracolovesme
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
isn\'t it ginerva?
person CaptainSolo
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Double Yew Tee eff!

Where\'s the rest?!?
person hardcast
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I am looking forward to reading the rest of it. One problem though Chapter 5 is also Chapter 6. If you can let me know when you update the story.
Good luck with school.
person justherefourfun
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it so far but has anyone noticed that chapter five and chapter six are exactly the same but besides that keep goin.
person CaptainSolo
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More more more!
person KyleBroflovskiRules(2 lazy to log in)
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I love it. ^.^