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for Sinful Behavior

by bbluebabies

person moni
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovin it!!!! a cute plot...
person moni
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
still like the plot after chapie 7...
person ametomoe
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, did u know that the sixth chapter is actually just a repeat of the fifth chapter? great story, i'd love to read more once you've fixed it!
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 & Chapter 6 are the same chapter.
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i had to stop reading your story. it needs to be edited. i am very confused by your use of ginevra and virginia. please pick one and stick with it.
person Apocrypha
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY ROCKS! Arghhh it's just soooooo good! Ahh! PLEASE update! Ahh!

Btw, I know alot of people have probably said this already, but
1. Blaise is a guy, not a girl, unless you wanted to change him to a girl in your story.
2. Chapter 6 and 7 are the same, and there's a missing part between 6 to 8. Could you fix that?

Otherwise, it's fantastic!
person Apocrypha
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Errmm, sorry, I meant Chapter 5 and 6 are the same, and there's a gap between 5 and 7.
person Julien
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like that story a lot. Mwuhahah, i Love the way they all scream and yell at each other... please continiue this story soon!!!
person Dani
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Awesome story can't wait to keep reading it. I LOVE Ginny/Draco. SO hot... haha. Anyways just one more thing, when you posted chapter 6, it was chapter 6. You just reposted chapter 5.
person hgforever
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

I like your story very much. but reading Chapter 6 I found out it is the same as Chapter 5,
it is double but chapter 6 is missing !!!!!
I can