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for Night-time Fun

by jkrocksmysocks

person Latricia
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodie. I love the alcove scene! It\'s so amazing. Can\'t wait to read more

I wonder what Draco is planning on doing with the camera. I got to admit, my first idea when he said to ask Colin for the camera was nothing like what you thought. And i\'m happy I was wrong. This is so much better. It\'s like he can\'t keep his hands off her and I love it. It\'s so refreshing and I hope to read more chapters from this and stories from you.

* I also like the scene when Pansy caught them, Crabbe and Goyle, with a pool of cum at their feet. That was priceless. They should have had the camera then. That would have been the perfect kodak moment; but I guess the taunting is enough; for now.

Until the next chapter...

Much Love

Latricia

xoxo

P.S thanks for the response in my reviews.
person Andrew
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome fic, I like how in this one Draco admits to Hermione that he loves her. I also like the fact that he wants to Kill Crabbe N\' Goyle just for knowing about him n Hermione lol. Keep it coming! It\'s good :)
person jchaser
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Didnt think the first chapter could be topped but somehow you managed...very steamy though its sweet they\'re so in love. Feel sorry for the dumb duo but cannot wait to see what happens. Thanks for such another great read!
person KrazyKiwi
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha, I always knew Crabbe and Goyle were sick. jk. Very good fic, thanks so much for writing it.
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fanning self to drop the temperature, but still not working*

Shit! This was so funny and i totally agree with the statement about you giving Inell a run for her money. This story is amazing. Are you sure this is your first story? Cause damn your good at this.

Until next time and the next one. (if you have one, which i\'m saying that you should)

Latricia
person Allie
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU ARE AMAZING PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!
person kaitlyn
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! i thought that this fic was amazing! i\'m waiting for the sequel!
person Narcissa Black
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the hottest damn fic I have read in a VERY long time. I swear, you give Inell a run for her money. You have to keep going. Stopping would just be...wrong, damn it.
person jchaser
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievably hot...your descriptions and writing were so intense. Thanks for such a great read! Hope there is a part 2.
person Kinnara
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps and whistles* Nice fic! You write good, and it stands out. Keep it up!