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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought your story was nice. some grammar and spelling errors, but nothing that made the story not understandable. you kept switching points of view. was the speaker hermione or a third-person? just the little stuff. but your story was good and the idea that hermione can lie too is brilliant. thank you for sharing..
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! It\'s funny. You are a great writer! Keep it up!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I guess you werent going for originality and it was decently done, however you seriously need a beta read. You changed tenses continuously and there were paragraphs of poor gramar and editing. Better luck next time, you can only grow from constuctive critism, but the she did this then did that gets old fast!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok story. There is a major problem with the voice of the story changing from thrid to first person several times. It makes it hard to read.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it. it would be interesting to see how this would play out.