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Ooooo *Jumps up and down* evil cliffy! Love this fic, it shows real promise and I have throughly enjoyed what I\'ve read so far. (ch 3) Please accept this bag of virtual chocolate frogs in a hope it will help you write. He he I always love eating chocolate as I write. Anywho hope to see an update soon!!

\"I\'m afraid I have some bad news...\"


About what?! This cliffhanger is haunting my dreams!

You must continue or I fear I shall die.

Other than that, you\'re a beautiful writer, you have a pleasant flow to everything.

Well, heck! You\'ve got me hooked. I hope you are a quick updater...I need to know the bad news. Soon I hope.

Oh please update, this is amazing! I always love such \"undercover couple\" stories. The two seem to be dealing with it rather well, except for Snape\'s affinity for drink.

I love this story.. I hope to hear (and by hear i mean read) more soon....

You have the makings of a great writer

Very good story so far. Hermione is acting like such an immuture brat, she really needs to grow up. I know Snape can be very infuriating but good grief she could at least act like an adult. Can just see the sexual tension between those two even they can\'t and man when they do hopefully hook up wow the fireworks are going to be HOT! Keep up the great work and I look forward to when you update.

Have you ever travelled? Wheres the jet lag for them? Even a little travelling induces jet lag. And the typical italian is not stickthin. Have you ever been to Italy? When I arrived in naples, I was shocked because the polizia had uzis in the airport-- this was before 9-11, of course. And Naples smells. And the people don\'t bathe, and they don\'t use deodorant. And the water is never potable-- drink a little, get cholera. Can\'t even brush your teeth with it. Often, even boiling it isn\'t enough to make the water drinkable, so they need bottled water for even little things like brushing their teeth. Naples is full of poverty. Surely Hermione would notice this and take offense. Theres street venders everywhere that would leap upon her like ravening dogs w/o some companion walking near her. Pickpockets abound.

I am completely enamored of your story! Great writing, dearie! I love the lust/hate warring between these two! You have done a great job staying true to the characters as well. Can\'t wait to read more(hint, hint). Update soon, por favor!!! Happy writing wishes from a very happy reader! Tengo que irme! Salud! (I must be off!Cheers!) New fan, Killer K :)

OMG!!!

You can\'t end a chapter like that!!!

Evil! You\'re evil!

:D

More please!

Wow! Chapters 2 and 3 were great! I love how Hermione slapped Severus when he felt her up after having those drinks. It was funny. Update soon! I can\'t wait to find out what bad news Albus has for them.

Tiffany