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for Stretched Out (2)

by chantalmalfoy

person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can you say \"hot\"???
I give this smashing little fic five GOLDEN stars!
A good sequel to \"Stretched Out\"
Left me on the edge of my seat... :D
now, after a thousand little cliches,
let me ask you this...
when is part 3 coming out?!?!?!
Update soon and have fun with it ;)
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best entires I\'ve ever read. The detail is fantastic, and the plot believable and imaginitive. My only complaint? The torturous wait for the sequel! I\'m slavering at the mouth here! You writing about Harry giving birth is definitely something I need to read, and more of the whole group interacting...cause they (you) do it so well! For the love of god, UPDATE! Please!
person Morgan Le Fay
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just as good as part 1----can\'t wait for part 3!!!
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good lord that was incredible! I just read both parts in one go, and please, please, please upload another soon! (as in, tomorrow, would be nice). Can\'t wait for more- you are an artist!
person mirage
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is poor children! lol
person Silent Sinner
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There\'s a part 3? Oh, girl, you spoil us! But it doesn\'t mean we don\'t like it! ;) Anyway, wonderful story and even hotter smut! I love your Severus and Draco is a dahling... *innocent smile with matching blinks* Oh... and poor Harry... Being ravished by those two hotties with no end at both ends... And TWINS!!! Oh... poor, poor, POOR Harry... Still, I think there would be many women (and men) who wouldn\'t die to be him in those moments... Well, sorry for the chatter.

Continue writing, honey! It was simply marvelous! And besides you have a unique style that is simply joi vivre! Take care and may you read this in good health!

~silent sinner
person Justin
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh...oh fuck...*moans* another hot one, I can\'t wait for the third part. do I get to see some incest in the future? I love how deliciously dirty you are *shivers* gods yessss...
person Joey
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
V. hott and more than a little kinky. About the sounding rods, are those actual sex toys? If so, email me with where you found out/got yours!
person momoko
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story
person LazySnake
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was mind oogling.
My eyes went like this --> O.O throughout the whole story.
I\'ll be waiting for the third part.

I need to rest and watch/read something normal to recover...
---> brain in daze, steps unsteady

Need to rest...Sorry for short sentences.