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for Prefect Bathroom

by ANNA

schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm... while this was definitely interesting i think it was far too rushed! Realistically, nobody in their right minds (even harry!) would find someone just about to commit suicide and then go straight to having sex with him! There are obviously a lot of underlying issues both boys needed to face and them jumping straight into bed *cough* i mean bath with each other wouldn't help a thing!
I think this could've been a brilliant story if it was spaced out a bit more and not so rushed...
Good job though anyway...
Stef
person Remi
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hot!
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
person Shannon
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, even though there are like a million SIing Draco fics out there \'cause of HBP, this is one of the better ones that I read. And the line