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for Ignorance Lost

by dragynphyre

person Kristy
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far, can't wait to see the rest of it!
person Drisowen
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rrr...So good! and cliffhangers! Please write more!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the dedication! I can't wait for chapter 2! Why are they going to Grimmauld? Who sent the owl? Oh I've gotta have more!
person Alison
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What's at 12GP? Did they get Sirius out of the veil? Please update soon! =o)
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was hoping for chapter 1! What happens next? It was Veela like but it had a horn. What was the being?
person Alison
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What/who was it? Was it Harry? Please update soon!!! =o)
person QuinnTalon
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Katie K
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm... an actual story would be really great about now... please?
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh there\'s no story!
person Draeconin
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but you\'ve made the classic modern mistake in giving an angel wings. Wings were an artists convention to depict \'holiness\' that began in Medieval times. Before that, horns were used for the same purpose. They weren\'t meant to be taken literally, but of course the ignorant of those times did, and the concept became widespread.

But to get back to the story, where was Harry during all this? One would think if Draco were being attacked for attempting an attack on Harry, Harry would be aware of it, and be there. You have a good concept, though. Maybe a little more thought on the details?