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for Fallen Angels

by artemis347

person inuyasha nut
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interestin
pls pls pls update dis again soon
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue,
this has so much potential,
I just know you could make a great series out of it
Go on
*beg*
person chi
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, uve got my attention
pls update soon
person LadyX
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hhhmmm...I am not sure if i like this yet or not..it isnt exactly one that gets you hooked from the begining you know? i will definatly stick with it at least for a little bit to see how it comes along...i await the next chapter. I have s feeling this will be good..dont be too long in the updates
person A bottom!Draco fanantic
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely dear. Absolutely lovely. Please update soon! ^.^
person chi
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting
me like dis
pls update
person Kit Kat
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
POOR DRACO!!!!! ::sniff:: but i can\'t wait to read more! This is very interesting so far, and i can\'t wait till Harry arrives in the chapters!! Keep it up!!!!
person sharon
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think a beta would be most helpful for you. You would also benefit by reading each paragraph when you finish it and then you would be reading what I am now reading. Please instead of pleasure and quite a few other places that brought down what looks to be a good author with a potentially great story.
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!! Awesome first chapter. I look forward to more. Nicely written. keep it up.
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how horrible for Draco! I can\'t wait for chapter 2!