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Fascinating!! You\'re taking the current time and storyline to new heights.. I love all this stuff with the Unbreakable Vows.. very, very interesting. I hope you continue really soon!

Most excellent!

A-freakin\'-MAZING! I was going to retire for the night, what was left of it, but then I started reading this story. And couldn\'t stop. I have to say even though I quite admire Snape\'s cleverness, I had to empathize with Hermione when she said she was going to kill him.

Ah, but I hope the story line will prove much more satisfying to her than mere murder....

Simply CANNOT wait to read more, so I SINCERELY and PROFOUNDLY hope you update soon. Excellently \"realistic\" (if such a word can be used in context of the Potterverse), everyone is quite nicely in charactor.

But do please have some pity on poor Draco. Poor little dragon caught in the midst of all the plotting and planning of his elders. I\'m sure he\'s quite insane at this point.

I will be recommending your story to those whom I know can handle the darkness, and it was plenty dark, even for myself with my fairly high squick tolerance!

Like this one, will look forward to reading more.

wow! I really want to see where this is going...your chapter names are genius, btw. I love Tori Amos, that lryic fit this chapter very well.

I heard about this fic from a reccomendation on Fleab\'s yahoo group. The description from the poster whetted my desire to read. I flicked over using the link and read the first chapter. Wow, you worked fast to get this up so quickly. I applaude your style and viewpoint. Many of us who are well schooled in HP fanon as well as canon will do well to keep up with this particular fic. I can see you have a dark bent. The way in which you protrayed the death of Black was masterfully handled. We were given a gruesome demise but were not forced to \'watch\' it, as it were. Having to recieve the knowledge second hand through Lucius and Severus was perfect. I am interested to see what goes on with Lucius. I have my own opinions regarding his thoughts when he learns that his son, his heir, was used as a punishment for his failings. Will he actually move against Voldemort when he realizes just how far the madman will sink to fulfill his desires? You have used the clues that JK left us to good purpose. We know that RB could not have acted singlely when he took the original locket. Dumbledore told us that no one could possibly go to the island alone. I plan on printing the remaining chapters and enjoying them tonight as I snuggle down in my bed. This looks to be a good ride.

WTF?! he doesnt want to to stop the dark lord? totally through me for a loop. the whole bearing a child thing wasnt even as surprising as this. you are a great wrtier and i love this story, pleez continue writing. i think hermione was kinda dumb \"o lookie just gonna drihnk some strasnge liquid the guy who killed dumbledore gives me, totally not dangerous, doo dee dooo.\" hhe hee post more !

Yayyyy another update!!!! Excellent chapter. Poor Hermione, I feel bad for her :( I loved her little speech to Snape though that was good. And a nice little cliffie on the end there, evil evil lol. I liked your choice of chapter title on this, I absolutely love Tori Amos I\'ve been listening to her since I was 14. Anyhow your doing a fabulous job on this fic keep up the great writing!!!!!

~*~*~*Shannon*~*~*~

Sorry, this is an apalling story, really horrible - not the writing, but the plot. You should have given more warnings in the summary.

I think your really onto Snape\'s character here. I do believe that Dumbledore asked Snape in the tower to do what was neccessary, and while I feel snape has no love for the \"Dark Lord\" I do believe he really is a snarky evil bastard in his own right. And you nailed Hermione too, sometimes her quest for knowledge and desire to continually be right blinds her to other possibilities. Bravo to you for putting together a very feesible and interesting concept in this fic. I shall be reading! Cheers!