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for Snape's Redemption

by JCB

person lemonade
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is disturbing yet compelling. Your promise of redemption has me waiting for the next chapter, and since Severus is taking some personal responsiblity for what he is putting Hermione through, I can have a little more sympathy for him. You know, a time turner would be most helpful in going back to a time that Draco lived, if he really got desperate to have the bond broken. If that\'s where you go with it, do I get a cookie?? ;D

And Crookshanks rocks.
person nesscafe
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT YOU\'RE A GREAT WRITER!!! I don\'t know any other way to tell you how much I\'m enjoying this story. It\'s quite gruesome, but it\'s so fascinating. It\'s well written and it\'s just DAMN GOOD! I\'m always on the edge of my seat for the next chapter! Is AFF the only place you\'ve posted it? You should consider posting it on Ashwinder. It\'s one of the best Granger/Snape fanfiction sites. Here is the website if you are interested in hosting it there http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/index.php I can\'t wait for the next update! Hope it\'s soon!
person Gracie
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t want to wait this long for another update ever again. Okay? It\'s not nice. You can\'t just write an amazing fic and then leave the readers hanging for so long... It\'s SO not cool.
person kit
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...again x.x; wow...I had to read that twice through before it all really sank in and made sense, but wow...I can\'t be...no, I can believe it...you are doing a wonderful job! And with all these reviews and compliments you are recieving, I can hardly dare to believe mine make much difference. But...don\'t lose yer muse! Keep her! And update as quickly as possible! I check everyday like a puppy waiting fer its owner to return to see if you\'ve updated x.x as sad as that sounds...but I do. You\'ve written an absolutely fabulous story and I can\'t wait to see what happens next! Though I feel Snape\'s frustration at the visitors u.u; is it Harry? o.o; that\'d be interesting...erm, anyway, enough of my babbling....keep it up!
person Ash
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again..good job. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.


The last few Anita Blake books really aren\'t worth reading, but the first 8 or so are good
person luvssnape
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated. I have been looking everyday. I love this story. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Your Snape is very dark. I like that! hehe
person Septentrion
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. Now I wonder who those visitors are...
person Jzeylyn
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO! Don\'t leave me hanging like that!!! Please, please update!!! This is fantastic!
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A hot chapter, dearie! Hope your muse continues to hang around!! Update as soon as possible- just tell real life to take a hike for awhile! Happy writing, mi chicquita! Tengo que irme! Salud!! Killer K
person Obsessive Fangirl
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the new chapter. More sex, please. >:D

Keep it up, I\'m really enjoying this.