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wow, pretty good chapter. I\'m glad Hermione got some things off her chest. Smart of her to look up the pregnancy thing, and the vow is finally clarified a bit. We found out that the \'whole sorry thing\' was his life, and not the end of Voldemort specifically- which is a very interesting turn. That makes the heir issue a little more clear. He wants his obligations to his family fulfilled before he goes. (Okay, he might not be suicidal, but he seems a bit like it to me) I think that Snape is making a big big mistake, though. Consent isn\'t really consent when you are threatened with death as the only other option. It. WAS. rape. Whether he likes it or not, he did a horrible thing, and he needs to face it and own it before he can be redeemed. Oh-- and even if she HAD some deep secret desire for him initially, if she didn\'t want to have sex and death from the vow forced her-- it\'s STILL rape. If he drugs her to make it easier for him to get her to have sex, it\'s rape.

Well that was some update! I cannot believe all you managed to cram into that last chapter but well done. As an aside, why are you not writing your own story to publish? Your imagination is incredible. You did blow me away with the deaths of Narcissa and Draco...but I was effing happy at the demise of Wormtail. I am looking forward to the Severus/Lucius quest. I really want them to put the screws to Voldemort. Thanks so much for the update!

Have truly enjoyed reading your version of what could happen. Well, it can be a bit squicky, [what happened to Draco & Narcissa] but it\'s well written and I still check for updates! Had a evil smirk on my face and cheered Crookshanks finally getting the rat!!!

Another great post, please post again soon. Thanks.

Wonderful, truly good! As a successful freelance writer, I despair at the low quality of work around. You have talent, keep going! Please finish this, I\'m hooked.

What a sad chapter. It was very powerful but very sad.

It was a disturbing yet wonderful chapter. Did I tell you how much I LOVED Pettigrew\'s death? Yes, definately a good way for that man to die. I\'m very anxious to see the next bit! ~Gin

I have to say I am really loving this story. This chapter surprised me! Pleasantly. ALthough I have to say poor Hermione (well, kinda. LOL) I suppose Lucius will take over for the bond, or what will happen???? Thanks for the quick updates!

More. Please. Soon? Sorry to be so monosyllabic, but this is great stuff!

Lee

always so interesting ! And thanks to update so quickly !