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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. This chapter helped answer several questions or clarify confusing issues that were puzzling me. Shame on Ron, the ass. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that this is the story on aff i watch the most! I love it! Snape is absolutley perfect in all his snarky glory...and the story line is amazing. Just wanted to let you know how much I love your story, and your writing!!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update! I\'m dying to know what\'s going to happen next!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bill!! Is a curse breaker!! Brilliant! I had forgotten that fact. Very clever of you. Let\'s hope Bill is clever, too. Perhaps with Hermione\'s cooperation, things would go a lot smoother if she couldn\'t accidentally die. That has to be worrying Severus, too. It would ruin his plans for her to die, and be quite the onus to bear.
I noticed that Snape seems to be attempting to take better care of her. Not allowing her to be his shield, healing her head injury. I am surprised at Molly, calling her a \'scarlet woman\'. She should know Hermione better than that, but I know she\'s thought the worst of her before, in canon (book 4- believing Rita). I agree that the Order really shouldn\'t trust her when she\'s bound to Severus. Honestly, she doesn\'t REALLY know who\'s side he\'s on, even though she hopes it is the good one. Harry was truthful and wonderful, and about as supportive as he really could be. He\'s a good friend, but Ron deserved the broken nose. I know he\'s heartbroken, but if he couldn\'t figure out that Hermione had gotten involved with things against her will, he might not be clever enough to deserve her. I hope Harry kicks some sense into him. I noticed he wasn\'t mad at Severus for roughing Ron up. ;D I\'m also happy to see some affection for Hermione coming from Severus. She deserves it.
I noticed that Snape seems to be attempting to take better care of her. Not allowing her to be his shield, healing her head injury. I am surprised at Molly, calling her a \'scarlet woman\'. She should know Hermione better than that, but I know she\'s thought the worst of her before, in canon (book 4- believing Rita). I agree that the Order really shouldn\'t trust her when she\'s bound to Severus. Honestly, she doesn\'t REALLY know who\'s side he\'s on, even though she hopes it is the good one. Harry was truthful and wonderful, and about as supportive as he really could be. He\'s a good friend, but Ron deserved the broken nose. I know he\'s heartbroken, but if he couldn\'t figure out that Hermione had gotten involved with things against her will, he might not be clever enough to deserve her. I hope Harry kicks some sense into him. I noticed he wasn\'t mad at Severus for roughing Ron up. ;D I\'m also happy to see some affection for Hermione coming from Severus. She deserves it.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ruin his plans IF she were to die. Sorry. I need a brain transplant.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ch an amazing story so good soooo goood its okay that your update took a while( not really) but it was worth the wait as always every time i get on this site i look for you fic cause it is so rfreaking good please keep going and update asap
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I loved that chapter! (even though i hated some of the characters in it, i.e-RON MUST DIE!)
Ha ha, Malfoy Manor- wondering if their are any spells inside the house that woiuld try to keep muggle-born Hermione out?
Harry and Hermione\'s conversation was tearful, and so was Hermiones reasoning-how she said that if Snape had used Tonks or Ginny, everyone would have wanted to defend them. Poor Hermione, she thinks no one else loves her. Although, I am hoping that Harry realises his love for Hermione, just b/c I do love drama, and also I hate Ginny. Hmm, De-ja-vu.(probably not spelled right.) Can\'t she see whats right infront of her? That being Snape\'s hot ass of course!
It\'s like all the people at Grimmauld place are so concerned with getting their revenge on Snape that they don\'t even care about Hermione any more. ;( and thats sad. Maybe Tonks or Lupin will help.(Lupin just makes sense, and Tonks, well, I like Tonks.)
This chapter was awesome, Hermiones feelings, Snape\'s reaction, Bill(dammit, I was wrong!), and your imagery used to describe Malfoy Manor. Most of the time when it comes to decribing places, I just skip through them in a story, but your writing style was just so awesome, I literally could imagine Snape and Hermione walking up the tree-lined road to the manor. Amazing imagery there.
I wonder what Lucius will think of Snape \'borrowing\' his manor. Mwahahahaha! *coughs* gotta stop doing that!
And thanks for the e-mail, your so nice! Hope you liked the pics ^~^
-XM
Ha ha, Malfoy Manor- wondering if their are any spells inside the house that woiuld try to keep muggle-born Hermione out?
Harry and Hermione\'s conversation was tearful, and so was Hermiones reasoning-how she said that if Snape had used Tonks or Ginny, everyone would have wanted to defend them. Poor Hermione, she thinks no one else loves her. Although, I am hoping that Harry realises his love for Hermione, just b/c I do love drama, and also I hate Ginny. Hmm, De-ja-vu.(probably not spelled right.) Can\'t she see whats right infront of her? That being Snape\'s hot ass of course!
It\'s like all the people at Grimmauld place are so concerned with getting their revenge on Snape that they don\'t even care about Hermione any more. ;( and thats sad. Maybe Tonks or Lupin will help.(Lupin just makes sense, and Tonks, well, I like Tonks.)
This chapter was awesome, Hermiones feelings, Snape\'s reaction, Bill(dammit, I was wrong!), and your imagery used to describe Malfoy Manor. Most of the time when it comes to decribing places, I just skip through them in a story, but your writing style was just so awesome, I literally could imagine Snape and Hermione walking up the tree-lined road to the manor. Amazing imagery there.
I wonder what Lucius will think of Snape \'borrowing\' his manor. Mwahahahaha! *coughs* gotta stop doing that!
And thanks for the e-mail, your so nice! Hope you liked the pics ^~^
-XM
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh this is the worst cliffy ever! update soon! there are so many possibilities of who it could be! loving every line, Erica
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heeelllooo!!! Where are youuuu??? You must update soooonnn!!! Or I will continue to annoy youuuu!!! Tengo que irme! Saluuuddd!!!
Impatiently awaiting,
Killer K ;p
Impatiently awaiting,
Killer K ;p
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya
i\'m sure this little review wont mean much coz looking at your 166 other ones ur not doing to bad for urself lol and the funny thing is that i\'m an aussie living in the hussle and bussle of the usa and to stick up for my aussie sister had to tell her how great her story is sooo you better keep on writing girl coz a hellof a lot over people love it
love
Estelle Etain M