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wow

I am so crying right now. If i was Hermione, I would hate myself. To have a man love you so much, then leave everything he owned, including his heart, to you; but you are married to another. I would be heartbroken. But i was wondering if they had a secret relationship in Hogwarts or after that. And a message to her so-called-friends-who-couldn\'t-give-her-fucking-message: \"You all are a bunch of jackasses. If someone sends her a letter, even try using a phone to get to her; give her the fucking message. I\'m sure she would of wanted to know. I don\'t care how unimportant you think it is, give her the damn message.\"

Can\'t wait to read more

Much love
Latricia

Hey! I love this! This is unique and really good. My heart just broke for Draco and Narcissa because he was his mother. I especially love this part:

\"He never forced you to like him, never tried to convince you. Draco was always content to let you choose and wait for you to notice him. I loved my son and watching him stare hopelessly at you from a distance broke my heart.\"

Greatness!

How about write another one-shot in Hermione\'s POV? Like what she was thinking while reading the letter or what her feelings are for Draco?

OMG this is soo unique and it just sounds so heartbreaking, and sweet. It was an extremely great piece of angst.

Sad. Since I don\'t like sad things, I won\'t say that I liked it, but I suppose it was good.

It is well written. Not the best, but good enough.

*sniffles* awwwww . great story. Made me cry!

::sniff:: ::sniff:: aww... that was sad.... ::sob:: But I love all sappy-ness shit like that. But that was undescribeable -- I actually started to cry in the middle of the god damned letter! Lol. I don\'t know why the thought of Draco dieing almost always makes tears spring up into my eyes, but man... this one definitely did more than that. I could feel my heart breaking as I read what Narcissa was writing; how he wanted to be there on the day that would have been the most important of her life, and only asked of her to be there on his... and she couldn\'t. ::bawls::
The letter was a great one-shot, I should tell you... the emotions love, hate, heartbreak, animosity, passion... they just... hit you like a ton of bricks. Well, at least, it did so for me. I have to applaud you and give you my love for this... it\'s truely incredible. Now if you may excuse me... I have to go find some Kleenex... ::tear::

Masked Emotions

Wow. That was really good. You did an amazing job of capturing soo much in one small letter. I dont even know how to say how wonderful i thought that was. i have always been a fan of things that are short and sweet, and your story was the definition of it. Very VERY good job and look forward to reading more of your work.