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Heartbreaking... 2 short letters and I'm crying, smh...

Oh. My. God. That was so good, and its only the second chapter. I cried so much at reading Draco's letter to Hermione, and I cannot wait till the next chapter comes. I do hope somewhere along the lines he will return to her, even in ghost form. That would be really awesome.

NOWAY!!! i want it all to be a test to see if she truly loved him...please dont let draco be dead! wht kind of story is this!!??!!!?
i want her to show up at his grave(if he had one) and then him be there saying \"wht took you so long\" and then she divorces ron and they live happily ever after!! well no happily...cus u gotta have the angst!!!
UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!
definatly email me...we need to talk!!
my email is: Kristal_Cerveja@hotmail.com
but i love your story!! hoep u update...or is it finished??
:( i distressed now!
:):):):) loving the story...keep on writin!:):):):)

--Kristal

i truely love your story its so original and smart more fics should be like this. forget what \'Anon\' wrote he/she truely dosn\'t know a good story and a talented writer is if it hitter on the fuckin face. he/she is just a bored and bitter person

That was so sad. Can\'t say I agree with what Hermione decided. So Draco killed himself so Hermione could be happy with Ron. I guess if Hermionee keeps repeating that and rereading that letter over and over that it would make it true. Its weird before HBP Hermione was perceived as smart, now not so much. If Draco wanted her to be happy he shouldn\'t of said anything at all. Even that doesn\'t sound like something Draco would do. He\'d probably try to break up their marriage, but I guess that isn\'t as angsty.

No Romeo and Juliet ending for Draco/Hermione this time. Kudos for originality though.

Oh this is so sad...

\"Anon 2005-09-11 id # 2035404675
Thanks Naduah for trying to justify breaking the rules of a site. I will now be reporting this story to the mods and admin of this site. We all agree to rules to post a story and should follow them. They are not meant to be ignored. \"

Hi!
I was wondering if you could direct me to the portion of this site that directly states that fics that do not involve sex and violance are not allowed? I would greatly appreciate it, for as is, i see no such rule. I only see that this is a safe haven for adult themed fanfiction... but unfortunatly saying that it is a safe haven does not mean that fics that are not sexually explicit are not allowed.
See i happen to really like this fic, as well as this author, and while i can understand your concern for the rules, i think you are one being very anal and a complete bitch and two i am not positive you have your facts straight. BUT i could be completely and totally wrong (willing to admit) so.. just direct me to said rule that my friend is ignoring and everything will be peachy kean!
Thanks a bunch :)

As much as I want to praise you, I have to be the person to ring reality to this story. You wrote a story on a site that is designated for adult fics. While the creators of this site did create it for the intention of being a place to write smut fics, it can also have hard R fics that have strong violence. Your fic has neither and doesn\'t belong here. You rated it \'R\' yet you clearly stated in the first chapter that it was PG-13 at the most. I suggest you remove this fic from this site or edit it to fit the rating.

Thanks Naduah for trying to justify breaking the rules of a site. I will now be reporting this story to the mods and admin of this site. We all agree to rules to post a story and should follow them. They are not meant to be ignored.

\"As much as I want to praise you, I have to be the person to ring reality to this story. You wrote a story on a site that is designated for adult fics. While the creators of this site did create it for the intention of being a place to write smut fics, it can also have hard R fics that have strong violence. Your fic has neither and doesn\'t belong here. You rated it \'R\' yet you clearly stated in the first chapter that it was PG-13 at the most. I suggest you remove this fic from this site or edit it to fit the rating.\"

And I suggest that you blow it out your ass. This is one of the FEW, original, decent fics on this ENTIRE SITE. How DARE you suggest that she remove it. It may not be rated correctly, but at least is isn\'t the ones that say, \"anf draco wuz like oh hermione, suck my big monster cock\". Be happy with what you GET.

To the Author, awesome job. It made me all teary eyed.