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by fazed

person IrIdEsCeNt
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love your stories, they are awesome, and this one is hilariously funny (well that\'s redundant.) I cannot wait for the next chapter. Au revoir!
person Lishel Fracrium
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh I definitely like please continue.
person Suicide Skittles
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*^^* That was friggin\' awesome!! I laughed my ass off!! For good reasons mind you, just the picture of the little Malfoy and Remus fighting over an ubber confused Harry along with Lucius(God bless that beautiful man!!) smirking all sexy at a pissed off Narsissa over slash(with hints of \'cest) inspired plot bunnys was great!! Oh, will there be Malfoy-cest? I sure hope so..... There isn\'t enough of it for this slightly disturbed youth!! Update soon!!!

Luck&Love ~Skittles
person Storm
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great beginning. I hope you continue this story. Can\'t wait to read the update.
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god, you got werewolves chasing him! that is soooooooooooo funny!!!! I love it!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!! LM/HP/DM are my fav couples!! I love Harry getting fucked hard by those two.
person IrIdeScEnT
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Bravado!!! Superb!! I loved it. Aw man that was funny! More please!!! Por favor!!!
person Alexa
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! You have a slightly humorous tone to the whole thing that I just LOVE! This story is going to be so much fun!
I love that it\'s Draco, Lucius AND Remus!
OH(!), could you make that most magical creatures in the forbidden forest reacted the same way? Just imagine him going there (maybe on a school group assignment to gather something, I don\'t know) and things starting to sniff him out... A few different kinds arguing... That could be such a lovely mess! And those that found out about his presense in the school would try to get there, and the more intelligent ones might start negotiations with Dumbledore to visit, and Dumbles would have to really worry about students not going to the forest - lest they be abducted as barganing material. Oh, if someone could be taken, and the parents would get involved, and Malfoy would work to keep Harry \'safe\' from such advanses, and there would be a whole lovely political mess... ! Please? :-) Pretty please with two naked blonds on top?
I loved Narssisa\'s character - \"all that lovely money\" - how about adding 5 lines at the end of every chapter telling what she is doing at the moment with the money? Getting a massage, buying a mansion, having a divorsee party with her devorsed female friends, visiting a strip club, shopping, gambling, getting a young gorgeous gigolo, thanking God/Merlin for Lucius devorsing her, questionning why she didn\'t think of leaving him before... with some lovely money... :-) Please? It would be hilarious!
(Oh, and by the way, you wrote \"majority\" in stead of \"maturiry\".)
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really good
update soon
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Boy!! A new one! I do love to read what you write. **giggles**
person Robyn
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, I hope you update soon!