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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Marvelous it is, just marvelous :)
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KYaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! This fic is cute: draco fainting every time he hears about pregnancy news are hilarious (it's quite occ since he's usually the ice slytherin price :DDD). Why did you end the fic with just 5 chapters?? I wanna read more ^^. It seems that I've almost read most of your fics and i enjoy all of them, so thanks for the fics. Write more, ne. Ja ne. =D
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read one oneshot Mpreg, and I was hooked. Before I was like ewwww pregnant men. That's nasty. Then I read one really good one and one really funny one and one that was slightly disturbing. But this one would have been great if not for that slightly disturbing note. Both Lucius and Draco? Not that I don't think Harry is the luckiest man alive but come one. His son in law gave birth to his grandson and daughter. Does no one but me find this odd and weird?
Other then that I kinda enjoyed it. I don't know I guess that is one inhibition I can't let go of so easily. I'll never be able to stomach Father and son sharing one man, well not completely anyway. Harry's right you turned Draco into the classic fanfiction Ron. Having him faint at every little thing. Lucius being so understanding, was weird at first. I do however think Harry gave in to quickly, but then again it was a short story so I guess that's fine. I love the fact that Hermione was so supporting, this was one of the few stories where I didn't hate her.
Keep up the good work.
Nikki
Other then that I kinda enjoyed it. I don't know I guess that is one inhibition I can't let go of so easily. I'll never be able to stomach Father and son sharing one man, well not completely anyway. Harry's right you turned Draco into the classic fanfiction Ron. Having him faint at every little thing. Lucius being so understanding, was weird at first. I do however think Harry gave in to quickly, but then again it was a short story so I guess that's fine. I love the fact that Hermione was so supporting, this was one of the few stories where I didn't hate her.
Keep up the good work.
Nikki
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*melts into smiling puddle of happy goo*
LoL
LoL
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent story. I loved it.
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW soo cute. You know I'm starting to really like hp/dm/lm stories
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I can't believe you have them calling Harry 'Mummy'!! That is too funny ;)
Cute story though.
Cute story though.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just read this story and Union of Three and I have to say they were great. They were written very well and there was nothing that was repeated. Except for the twin part and same mummy diffrent daddy, but it was in a good repeated way. Anyway keep up the good work.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH this deserves a sequal...or, better yet, another LM/HP/DM like this one... very talented, you are!
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The things that make this fanfic a bad one are... numerous.
There is little real character interaction outside of sex. The sex is all very very similar. The sex happens so fast. There is no character or plot development.
Why aren't Draco and Harry, Harry and Lucius, Draco and Lucius, Harry and Draco and Lucius talking to each other?! They know very little about each other at this point, they don't really have a relationship, they have mindless, meaningless sex. Why aren't Severus and Remus talking more? Why aren't they *there*? Why aren't Hermione and Ron *there*? Why aren't they researching and talking to him and being involved more in events?
Why does Harry just accept all this immediately? Why is there no thinking and talking and insecurity with each other?
The three have a history, separate and together, it is not a very positive history at that. Why isn't there bickering and fighting and arguing? Normal things that should be happening between two and three people who are just now starting to learn about the real people behind the public images they present should be talking and fighting. All I see are a bunch of sex scenes crammed into a plot line that could be a lot more than it is.
There is no sense of affection or interest in each other, just lust. No sense of people and learning about one another, just sex. And the pregnancy? Contrived, abrupt. I could care less about this, there is no emotion there.
Harry takes everything way to easily. There is no looking into matters, no private searching of self or books, the elemental? Is a meaningless device that appears briefly and seems to have no further purpose.
I question how Lucius got the legal papers so quickly and why Narcissa did not give more challenge and where the hell Voldemort and his death eaters, which Lucius is one of, are.
Why is Harry so good at sex when he is a virgin? First timers rarely have as much fun as he is, what with as little preparation as he has had as well. Why isn't there more tensing and gentle coaxing? More tender talking and explaining? Why is Harry so good at blow jobs right off when he really shouldn't be? How does he know how to expertly give a blow job when he is a virgin?
At the very least, spelling seems decent enough.
There is little real character interaction outside of sex. The sex is all very very similar. The sex happens so fast. There is no character or plot development.
Why aren't Draco and Harry, Harry and Lucius, Draco and Lucius, Harry and Draco and Lucius talking to each other?! They know very little about each other at this point, they don't really have a relationship, they have mindless, meaningless sex. Why aren't Severus and Remus talking more? Why aren't they *there*? Why aren't Hermione and Ron *there*? Why aren't they researching and talking to him and being involved more in events?
Why does Harry just accept all this immediately? Why is there no thinking and talking and insecurity with each other?
The three have a history, separate and together, it is not a very positive history at that. Why isn't there bickering and fighting and arguing? Normal things that should be happening between two and three people who are just now starting to learn about the real people behind the public images they present should be talking and fighting. All I see are a bunch of sex scenes crammed into a plot line that could be a lot more than it is.
There is no sense of affection or interest in each other, just lust. No sense of people and learning about one another, just sex. And the pregnancy? Contrived, abrupt. I could care less about this, there is no emotion there.
Harry takes everything way to easily. There is no looking into matters, no private searching of self or books, the elemental? Is a meaningless device that appears briefly and seems to have no further purpose.
I question how Lucius got the legal papers so quickly and why Narcissa did not give more challenge and where the hell Voldemort and his death eaters, which Lucius is one of, are.
Why is Harry so good at sex when he is a virgin? First timers rarely have as much fun as he is, what with as little preparation as he has had as well. Why isn't there more tensing and gentle coaxing? More tender talking and explaining? Why is Harry so good at blow jobs right off when he really shouldn't be? How does he know how to expertly give a blow job when he is a virgin?
At the very least, spelling seems decent enough.