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for The Long Black Coat

by bloodcultoffreud

person Strawberryblush
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done, and very unusual, seeing through a muggle mother\'s eyes. I would dearly love to see a companion piece to this done from either Snape or Hermione\'s POV, seeing exactly what happened between them in those private moments in the forest that made her change her mind. I loved the footprint part as well - taken from the old werewolf legend that your can become one by drinking dew from their footprints? Very inventive, and very smooth.
person Adriana
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this a while back on your personal site . . . I really liked it, along with one of my all time favorites, \"Tyger! Tyger!\". It strikes me as funny that most people who write HG/SS fics write him as being \"redeemed\" for his past (including my own fics), yet in your story, we see something that is much more in keeping with canon. (Although I guess we won\'t know the truth until the next book, eh?). I know you wrote this before HP and the HBP came out, but how prophetic! This scenario seems more likely than anything \"fluffy\" that could be written. Anyway, I\'m glad you posted this and it is good to hear from you. Occasionally, I check your personal site to see if you\'ve written anything new. I hope you continue to write, I think you\'re very talented.

Adriana
person Lyndie578
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read this before and thought it was Great! But after HPB is has a prophetic quality about it. Thanks for re-posting this fic!